Alcander Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 [align=center]Well I don't know too much about sigs, I think this is a good outcome ^^please... give me some hints :/ CnC[/align] EDIT: .PSD File Here!EDIT: .PSD File Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 The right shoulder is LQ most likely from dodge. I want to see some more depth and the lighting seems slightly off. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 Thanks mate! ^^ I'm just a noob at this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Lightning Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 Pretty decent for a 1st try. As said above, you need some more depth and flow. Also, try to blur the stock a little, since it doesn't look so good when it's as sharp as the render. After you do that, I suggest adding a few more effects and making it look neater. This piece has good potential... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 I guess I know what do you mean guys, thanks D: @Dark Lightningyou mean it looks over-sharpened? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 The doge on the should is too high. For a first, the lighting is decent, but flow and depth need improv :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 12, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 The doge on the should is too high. For a first' date=' the lighting is decent, but flow and depth need improv :D[/quote']Actually I didn't meant to do "flow" but well... yeah I know about the shoulder like 25000st said above. Anyways thanks for your comment. Damn make sigs is quite hard D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted April 12, 2010 Report Share Posted April 12, 2010 Nice concept and cool effects though ;) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Lighting is probably your worst problem seems as if its coming off all angles. Though this is either a Copy+Paste, or just a godly first try. But i'll have to see what you did. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Lighting is probably your worst problem seems as if its coming off all angles. Though this is either a Copy+Paste' date=' or just a godly first try. But i'll have to see what you did.[/quote']this is not a copy+paste thingy-s**it.. I'm going to upload the .psd tomorrow -.- thanks for your comment... I guess. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haze Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Your lighting depth and flow need improvement. I see you being a great Gfx artist sometime. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Thanks Haze ^^ yep I'm a noob on sigs >_< any hint to improve on lighting, depth and flow? probably a quick tutorial, it seems that's the huge problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haze Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 just look up tuts on deviant art, that's where I find my tuts. Search Gimp sig tut or photoshop sig tut, which ever you use Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Was this.....your first? o.o Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Night Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Lighting is probably your worst problem seems as if its coming off all angles. Though this is either a Copy+Paste' date=' or just a [b']godly first try[/b]. But i'll have to see what you did.this is not a copy+paste thingy-s**it.. I'm going to upload the .psd tomorrow -.- thanks for your comment... I guess. I didnt say anything bad. In fact i said something good. If you can show me the psd, and it isnt a copy and paste than this is a Good tag for anyone. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Cool concept, not really cool execution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 I agree with Walker. IF I could see the original stock/.psd/.xcf/whatever I could judge better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Still, if this is a first try, it's damn good. You're already better than half the people in this thread. :P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 It's actually not a first try. The one in your sig, Alcander? That ws your first try I do believe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 If you'd just tune down the lighting on his shoulder a little, it would already be a lot better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chairman ali Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 I could see a lot of lighting work even though I don't have the original stock and I could see a few solid shapes here and there, so no this is obviously not C+P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
'tyleR Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 It's actually not a first try. The one in your sig' date=' Alcander? That ws your first try I do believe.[/quote'] He's still better than you. :/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EHN. Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 It's actually not a first try. The one in your sig' date=' Alcander? That ws your first try I do believe.[/quote'] He's still better than you. :/ Did I ever say he wasn't? No. Please, stop being a dick when I haven't even said anything bad about it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alcander Posted April 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 >_< stay cool dudes! mhm yep like Neo said the one in mi sig was my 1st but it was just brush spam, so I guess this is my real real 1st try. I'm going to upload the .psd EDIT: psd file posted. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Twenty-five Zero Oh-oh Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 It's actually not a first try. The one in your sig' date=' Alcander? That ws your first try I do believe.[/quote'] He's still better than you. :/ Did I ever say he wasn't? No. Please, stop being a dick when I haven't even said anything bad about it.Once again, more pointless posts. Why do you guys keep rubbing in comments like that? They don't help anyone and make the place less friendlier. :( Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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