Greatwolfking Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 This card will be put in a deck that is based on special summoning beast type monsters then putting them in the graveyard to boost their power. lore:When this card is Summoned you can discard 2 Beast-Type monsters from your Hand to destroy one face down card on your opponents field. When this card is destroyed by battle you can return 1 Beast-Type monster from your Graveyard to your Hand. Lore: This card cannon be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summon by sending 3 Beast-Type from your Deck to your Graveyard. Once per turn you can Special Summon 1 Beast-Type monster from your Graveyard in face up Attack position. When this card is destroyed, destroy all monsters Special Summon by this card.deviantart is where i got the pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Canadian Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Minimal OCG errors, picture needs a background, but other than that, I'm very impressed for your first card! OCG (Official Card Grammar) fix: When this card is Normal Summoned, inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Beast-Type monsters in your Graveyard x200. When this card is destroyed as a result of battle, Special Summon 1 Beast-Type monster with 1500 ATK or less from your Deck. Really balanced card with a nice burn effect too. If I were you, I'd make his deffence 200.7.5/10. Nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adogadog8 Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 I think that it should like make like all beast type monsters on the field have like 200 more ATK when it dies, because it has a high ATK to startGood effect for first card 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greatwolfking Posted April 13, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 Thanks Canadian and Adog for the ideas and ocg fixes i will fix them immediately Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 nice card! good job for your first card!9-10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Greatwolfking Posted April 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 Thanks Blue eyes for the rate Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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