Brady1999 card!

[Altaïr]

lore:1 Insect-Type tuner monster + 1 Machine-Type non-tuner monster

Pay 700 Life Points,this card can atack directly. Once per Turn, pick 1 of your opponent's Face-Up monsters that monster cannot attack this Turn.

Brady1999's first card!

[byak]

Infernity Beetle + Lv 9 Machine?

Meh

[Headmaster Monokuma]

Overpowered! I can't help your OCG, but it's increadably OPed. Let's take a look.

 

Pay 700 Life Points,this card can atack directly. Once per Turn, pick 1 of your opponent's Face-Up monsters that monster cannot attack this Turn.

 

Bold first. The thing has 3400 ATK, and for 700 LP, it can attack directly. Even worse, Synchros can be summoned quickly, and well, this would be hard to get rid of. Make it cost around maybe 1500 LP, or lower the cards attack, alot. That would make it a bit more Balanced.

 

Ictalized next. With the last effect, well, attacking directly, and then, even if they do summon a monster to destroy it with, you can just stop the attack. The only way to really get rid of the card is a Spell or Trap card.

 

It's a good first card, but it could use some balancing.

[byak]

Overpowered! I can't help your OCG' date=' but it's increadably OPed. Let's take a look.

 

[b']Pay 700 Life Points,this card can atack directly.[/b] Once per Turn, pick 1 of your opponent's Face-Up monsters that monster cannot attack this Turn.

 

Bold first. The thing has 3400 ATK, and for 700 LP, it can attack directly. Even worse, Synchros can be summoned quickly, and well, this would be hard to get rid of. Make it cost around maybe 1500 LP, or lower the cards attack, alot. That would make it a bit more Balanced.

 

Ictalized next. With the last effect, well, attacking directly, and then, even if they do summon a monster to destroy it with, you can just stop the attack. The only way to really get rid of the card is a Spell or Trap card.

 

It's a good first card, but it could use some balancing.

 

No.

It's not OP'd.

Because how the heck are you supposed to summon it?

[Headmaster Monokuma]

Infernity Beetle + Lv 9 Machine?

Meh

I don't know what Infernity Beetle is' date=' but here is your machine.

 

 

[img']http://images1.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20080530011822/yugioh/images/e/e5/SuperVehicroid-StealthUnionGLAS-EN-ScR-1E.png[/img]

 

Or you can use this.

This thing.

This as well.

Here you go.

Maybe even this?

This?

 

Also, I was talking about the effect in general. I hate Synchros, so I ignored the fact it was one.

[Mugendramon]

Overpowered! I can't help your OCG' date=' but it's increadably OPed. Let's take a look.

 

[b']Pay 700 Life Points,this card can atack directly.[/b] Once per Turn, pick 1 of your opponent's Face-Up monsters that monster cannot attack this Turn.

 

Bold first. The thing has 3400 ATK, and for 700 LP, it can attack directly. Even worse, Synchros can be summoned quickly, and well, this would be hard to get rid of. Make it cost around maybe 1500 LP, or lower the cards attack, alot. That would make it a bit more Balanced.

 

Ictalized next. With the last effect, well, attacking directly, and then, even if they do summon a monster to destroy it with, you can just stop the attack. The only way to really get rid of the card is a Spell or Trap card.

 

It's a good first card, but it could use some balancing.

 

No.

It's not OP'd.

Because how the heck are you supposed to summon it?

 

Perhaps Machine-Type Tuner and insect non-Tuner?

[Altaïr]

he made that one oh and he signed up his user name is VampYoshi101

[Parion555]

Well for a first Card it isn't bad.I mean how will you even Summon it it would be hard as hell.Too tired to do OCG errors now so i'll just give it a 7/10.

[RedRaptor10]

I'll test my new rating system. :)

 

3/5 for cool name and picture. it's unbalanced, has ocg errors, and not really original. But since its the first card, its 3/5.

[Altaïr]

he joined so he is called VampYoshi101