-JayJack- When the silent moon awakens - New Blackwing!

[jayjack]

 

1 "Blackwing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can remove from play all face-up monsters on the field with more ATK then this card. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard. Reduce the ATK of all monsters on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand with the same ATK or Level as the destroyed monster during the end of the Battle Phase.

[Canadian]

Flawless OCG.

 

Nice to see you keep up with the "I'm a Blackwing and consiquently will have an Overpowered effect" theme.

 

I actually don't care for the image this time.

 

Still, 10/10 (:

[MibeR]

nice and pretty effeact..man..

 

yuore epic

[Fizzy™]

Great OCG. I like the effect.

The pic is good.

I like the creativity and design too.

I'll give it a 9.7/10 (which is brilliant ^^)

[bakupenguin]

how did you get the name rainbow? anyway 10/10

[Zektor]

why does everyone have retarded font???

the rainbow makes it hard to read

pic i dont care for 7/10

[jayjack]

why does everyone have retarded font???

the rainbow makes it hard to read

pic i dont care for 7/10

 

wait, you didn't even rate for the card O.o

You just rated how "Crappy the image and font is'

buddy, i made it beautiful for a reason. You don't rate me down because you think i did it wrong. Some people don't even take the liberty to make their cards beautiful. Just strap on an effect to a pic.

Next time when you rate, take the actual card and effect into consideration, cause i don't care about how "Crappy the font and image is". i posted card for effect and creativity. Otherwise, refrain from posting.

 

Anyway, thanks for rate all!

[Quiksilver]

Flawless OCG. Not really. Look below for altered effect.

 

Nice to see you keep up with the "I'm a Blackwing and consiquently will have an Overpowered effect" theme. Very true' date=' yet how did you spell consiquently right? Even I have trouble spelling it. O_O[/color']

 

I actually don't care for the image this time. I do. It fits in with the "Blackwing" image, even though the name does not. Most "Blackwing" monsters are named after air currents and such. (EX: Gale the Whirlwind.)

 

Still, 10/10 (: Meh. I'm actually going to give you a 9.2/10.

 

As you can see, my critque is much like Canadians', albeit with a few alterations. For the OCG, actually all I meant was you did this-

 

1 "Blackwing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can remove from play all face-up monsters on the field with more ATK then this card. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard. Reduce the ATK of all monsters on the on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand with the same ATK or Level as the destroyed monster during the end of the Battle Phase.

 

Well, thats all I have to say. It a decent card. As I said before you get a 9.2/10.

[jayjack]

Flawless OCG. Not really. Look below for altered effect.

 

Nice to see you keep up with the "I'm a Blackwing and consiquently will have an Overpowered effect" theme. Very true' date=' yet how did you spell consiquently right? Even I have trouble spelling it. O_O[/color']

 

I actually don't care for the image this time. I do. It fits in with the "Blackwing" image, even though the name does not. Most "Blackwing" monsters are named after air currents and such. (EX: Gale the Whirlwind.)

 

Still, 10/10 (: Meh. I'm actually going to give you a 9.2/10.

 

As you can see, my critque is much like Canadians', albeit with a few alterations. For the OCG, actually all I meant was you did this-

 

1 "Blackwing" Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card is Synchro Summoned, you can remove from play all face-up monsters on the field with more ATK then this card. Once per turn, you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard. Reduce the ATK of all monsters on the on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000. When this card destroys a monster by battle, you can Special Summon 1 "Blackwing" monster from your hand with the same ATK or Level as the destroyed monster during the end of the Battle Phase.

 

Well, thats all I have to say. It a decent card. As I said before you get a 9.2/10.

 

Lol. Not OCG error, just wrote on the twice. Thanks for pointing that out, i'll edit.

[Quiksilver]

Yeah, I just didn't know what else to call it. :)

[jayjack]

Yeah' date=' I just didn't know what else to call it. :)

[/quote']

 

And btw, only the non-Synchro are named after wing currents/etc. Synchros have unique names like Blackwing Armor Master etc.

[Zektor]

why does everyone have retarded font???

the rainbow makes it hard to read

pic i dont care for 7/10

 

wait' date=' you didn't even rate for the card O.o

You just rated how "Crappy the image and font is'

buddy, i made it beautiful for a reason. You don't rate me down because you think i did it wrong. Some people don't even take the liberty to make their cards beautiful. Just strap on an effect to a pic.

Next time when you rate, take the actual card and effect into consideration, cause i don't care about how "Crappy the font and image is". i posted card for effect and creativity. Otherwise, refrain from posting.

 

Anyway, thanks for rate all!

[/quote']

 

thats my whole rating 7/10

anyway its that everyone has weird font not the fact that its rainbow the rainbow looks cool but makes it a little hard to read and the pic doesnt match there that better

[jayjack]

thats my whole rating 7/10

anyway its that everyone has weird font not the fact that its rainbow the rainbow looks cool but makes it a little hard to read and the pic doesnt match there that better

 

trust me, no one wants to hear it. You spend 20 minutes making the card beautiful and you get "The card looks ugly (Inset bad rating here)"

 

You can think it, laugh at it, but don't criticize about it (Just a little wisdom for the future).

 

Anyway, next time i prefer you rate on the effect, and not the card appearance. Thanks ^^

[Zektor]

ok then it looks good pic doesnt fit and its a little oped

[Yang Xiao-Long]

Epic.

 

Adds Blackwing support, I like it. The pic is excellent, and I like the card design itself. Personally, I rather do like the rainbow text and gold border, it adds elegance to an already magnificent card.

 

If this card was printed, I would buy it.

Excellent job, you made an awesome card.

[Phœnīcius Infīnius VII]

Once per turn, you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard.Wait a minute, shouldn't there be an "and" right there instead of the period? Reduce the ATK of all monsters on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000.

 

Once per turn, you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard and reduce the ATK of all monsters on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000.

 

That sounds more correct to me, please correct me if I am wrong.

[jayjack]

Once per turn' date=' you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard.[b']Wait a minute, shouldn't there be an "and" right there instead of the period?[/b] Reduce the ATK of all monsters on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000.

 

Once per turn, you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard and reduce the ATK of all monsters on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000.

 

That sounds more correct to me, please correct me if I am wrong.

 

Actually, an and is placed for a cost. It wouldn't work since the selected monster is stated in the same sentence, making it a run-on sentence.

 

Use this as a reference:

[Phœnīcius Infīnius VII]

Once per turn' date=' you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard.[b']Wait a minute, shouldn't there be an "and" right there instead of the period?[/b] Reduce the ATK of all monsters on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000.

 

Once per turn, you can select 1 "Blackwing" monster in your Graveyard and reduce the ATK of all monsters on the field with the same Level as the selected monster by 2000.

 

That sounds more correct to me, please correct me if I am wrong.

 

Actually, an and is placed for a cost. It wouldn't work since the selected monster is stated in the same sentence, making it a run-on sentence.

 

Use this as a reference:

 

Oh ya I see.

[Blackwing-Master]

Nice to see you keep up with the "I'm a Blackwing and consiquently will have an Overpowered effect" theme.

Tell that to mistral, fane, Armed wing, Silverwind. And don't say i'm defending them because i like b-wings.

 

As for the card, not bad, seems a bit over powered. First effect seems like much. I like the idea. Blackwing need a lv 8 that doesn't require 2 non-Tuners.

Love the card. 9/10

[byak]

Meh.

I counter with Generic Destruction.

[Quiksilver]

Yeah' date=' I just didn't know what else to call it. :)

[/quote']

 

And btw, only the non-Synchro are named after wing currents/etc. Synchros have unique names like Blackwing Armor Master etc.

 

Oh really?

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blackwing_-_Silverwind_the_Ascendant

 

I rest my case.

[NeXodus]

i like the originality and the pic.

the effect is nice and i dont see any ocg

nice card 9/10

[jayjack]

Yeah' date=' I just didn't know what else to call it. :)

[/quote']

 

And btw, only the non-Synchro are named after wing currents/etc. Synchros have unique names like Blackwing Armor Master etc.

 

Oh really?

 

http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Blackwing_-_Silverwind_the_Ascendant

 

I rest my case.

 

that doesn't count!

[Nɇvɇrmorɇ]

I've got no complaints! 10/10

[jayjack]

I've got no complaints! 10/10

 

Thanks

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