I like my Draw Phase

[Birkeland]

Two new archetypes I'm making. "Avaricious" cards deal with hurting your opponent for drawing cards, and "Generous" cards reward you for drawing cards.

 

I'm just wondering if the first effect (which they all have) is correct OCG. You can rate/hate/comment these guys if you want.Here are 1 of each:

 

Edit: Added 4 new monsters and 4 Spells/Traps

 

[spoiler=[b]Monsters[/b]]

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Avaricious Borealis

When you draw this card during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon it. When your opponent draws a card(s) outside of their Draw Phase, draw the same number of cards.

 

Generous Dominion

When you draw this card during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon it. During your opponent's Standby Phase, gain 500 Life Points for each card in your hand and your opponent draws 1 card.

 

 

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Avaricious Iraferno

When you draw this card during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon it. When your opponent draws a card(s) outside of their Draw Phase, inflict 600 damage to your opponent. This card gains 200 ATK for each card in your hand.

 

Generous Draco

When you draw this card during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon it. You cannot Special Summon monsters during the turn this card is Summoned. When this card is used as a Synchro Material Monster for the Synchro Summon of a "Generous" monster, draw 4 cards. Return any Spell or Trap Cards you draw to the Deck.

 

 

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Avaricious Kabuttobase

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. When you draw this card during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon it by Tributing 2 monsters. When your opponent draws a card(s) outside of their Draw Phase, destroy 1 face-down monster your opponent controls. This card can and must attack all monsters your opponent controls once each.

 

Generous Shapeshifter

When you draw this card during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon it by Tributing 1 monster. When you draw a card(s) outside of your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon 1 "Draw Token" (Warrior-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/ DEF 0) in Defense Position to your opponent's side of the field. When a "Draw Token" is destroyed, its controller draws 1 card. All "Generous" and "Avaricious" monsters gain 200 ATK for every "Draw Token" on the field.

 

 

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Avaricious Hitchhiker

When you draw this card during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon it by Tributing 1 monster. During your opponent's Draw Phase, your opponent can destroy 2 other cards you control. If they do, remove this card from play and inflict 800 damage to your opponent. Then, add 2 cards from your Graveyard to your hand.

 

Generous Machinangel

When you draw this card during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon it by Tributing 1 monster. When you draw a card(s) outside of your Draw Phase, you can switch the battle position of 1 monster on the field OR switch the ATK and DEF of 1 face-up monster on the field until the End Phase. This card cannot attack a player directly.

 

 

 

[spoiler=[b]Spells/Traps[/b]]

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Material Gift Foresight

When a "Generous" or "Avaricious" monster you control is destroyed by battle and sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon 1 "Generous" or "Avaricious" monster with lower ATK from your Deck or Graveyard in the same battle position the destroyed monster was in when destroyed. You cannot Special Summon monsters during your next turn.

 

Drawing Allies

Once per turn, if you Special Summoned a monster(s) during your Draw Phase, you can Special Summon 1 "Generous" or "Avaricious" monster from your hand or Graveyard. If you Special Summon a monster from the Graveyard with this effect, destroy this card and both players draw 1 card.

 

 

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Karma of the Draw

Each time a player draws a card(s) outside of their Draw Phase, place 1 Draw Counter on this card (max. 10). Monsters you control gain 100 ATK and DEF for every Draw Counter on the field. You can remove 10 Draw Counters from this card to skip your opponent's next Draw Phase. You can remove 10 Draw Counters from this card to conduct your next Draw Phase twice.

 

Punishment of Actions

Activate only when you control a face-up "Karma of the Draw". "Karma of the Draw" cannot be destroyed by card effects. Each time a player draws a card(s) outside of their Draw Phase, you can remove 2 Draw Counters from anywhere on the field to destroy 1 card on the field. If there is no face-up "Karma of the Draw" on the field, destroy this card.

 

 

 

[PeterClarke]

Not bad 9/10

i like the idea alot

[NeosWiseman]

Nice!!! So they are like a combo, right?

Anyway, 10/10

If you can just justify the description text, they would be perfect. ^_^

[Dranzer]

Nice cards and effects,but 1 card for 1000 LP doesn't seem enough.

 

9/10

[Shaco]

Nice cards and effects' date='but 1 card for 1000 LP doesn't seem enough.

 

9/10

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Agreed, I like the blue guy.

 

I'd either remove the LP limit, or make it so your opponent only draws a card if you gain more than (A certain amount of Life Points) by the effect.

 

I'm a fan of these cards.

[賢狼ホロ]

Nice cards, looking forward to see more. However, the second card is not as interesting as the first.

I am not sure about the "When you draw this card during your Draw Phase..."-part, but I have no better idea. ^_^

But I think it is "increase" Life Points, not "gain".

[Birkeland]

Thanks for the comments! Yeah, after reading Air Hummingbird, I figured 1000 wasn't enough. Glad people like the idea. I noticed that every other Phase has these amazing effects happen, and poor old Draw Phase here only gets "if it skips me well, its banned".

[goldenbjr8]

Good cards! I wish you could add them to your deck

[emopirate]

not bad 4 a beginer...and i see that u made 127 cards already...keep up d hardwork..lol...10/10...im expctng mor cards from u...i'll give u ur 1st reputation point

[TableCloth358]

I think they need a Drawback for being Summoned. Like have it have so you cannot Special Summon this turn or you cannot tribute the monster the turn it's Summoned. I like the tribute one. Good Job 10/10.1

[Canadian]

I'm liking Avaricious. He looks like a better version of Appropriate. Other one is okay, but I feel like it's missing something.

 

I like the style of SS'ing during your Draw Phase, maybe make some cards that base most of your turn around that Phase. Or turn these monsters into a set with their own names and have some form a Continous Card that reads "If you Special Summon a card during your Draw Phase due to it's effect, you can draw 1 more card from your Deck."

 

Really great idea. 9.5/10 (:

[Birkeland]

Small Bump. Added two new guys and changed Dominion. Still glad you guys like these...guys. I say 'guys' too much

[byak]

I've done something like this before. :l

Anyways, I don't like Draco, he gains stupid advantage and doesn't afraid of anything.

All the other ones are terrible.

[Coaster Guy]

Very good effects and great pics, i do not judge by OCG errors.

 

so 9/10

[Birkeland]

Bumping time! Fixed the old guys and added 8 new cards. Hoping to finish the 40+ card set by next week.

[PeterClarke]

really 40 cards by next week good luck

anyway these are better than blackwings IMO