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Apparently this is my first Beast-Warrior...


Yang Xiao-Long

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So I was having issues with the cardmaker (still am too, btw), and I came up with this card in complete and utter boredom. Tinypic is my best friend right now.

 

Anyway, here's the card. I'd like to introduce you to my latest creation:

 

Titanosaur, the Berserk Rage

 

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This card can and must attack all monsters on your opponent's field once each. During battle between this card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all other monsters on your field.[/align]

 

Image by Jazin Kay

 

Comments/rates appreciated!

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i amz tooz i havez to uze tinyzpix tooz.

nice card by the way. a tad bit oped and minor ocg flaws but ok.

6/10

o I also herdzuleikmukipz?

 

Ignoring all your spelling errors there...

 

If I have OCG errors' date=' what are they? Tell me how it's OP'ed please.

 

I prefer Cyndaquil thank you very much.

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Well for one, those were purposely spelled like that.

Now for the OCG.

I will write the effect and correct them in there:

This card must attack all monsters on your opponent's side of the field once each. During battle between this card and a (face-up or face-down) Defense Postion monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is destroyed (it's easier and shorter to understand), destroy all monsters on your field.

 

Some of them are OCG Errors, some are just to make the effect shorter and easier to understand.

 

It's OP'ed because it has 3200 ATK and IMO, anything over 3000 is an OP'ed ATK. And there isn't anything that makes this card any weaker.

The lower the ATK because if it attacks all monsters on the opponents field, (I doubt the opponent's going to somethin higher than 3200) then that's going to deal damage.

It's a good card, don't get me wrong, just some minor details and a tad OP'ed IMO though.

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"This card must attack all monsters on your opponent's field once each. During battle between this card and a Defense Position monster whose DEF is lower than the ATK of this card, inflict the difference as Battle Damage to your opponent's Life Points. When this card is removed from the field, destroy all other monsters on your field."

is beast warrior a type?

so far ?/10

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