Tunerwizard Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 I updated a new card that i made which now since my OCG has improved. I think that this card is a lot better and quite balanced! I want everyone to point out any OCG errors(even small ones). Also, if you don't want to do that, then I would greatly appreciate you posting what you think about my cards. :)~have fun cardmakers! [spoiler=Lore:]This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Lypes Calling of Retribution". If this card is on the field by any other type of Summon, destroy this card. Also, when a card is sent to the Graveyard, this card gains 700 ATK for each card. In addition, During the End Phase of a turn that this card attacked, discard your entire hand and then destroy a number of Spell or Trap Cards up to to the number of cards you discarded. [spoiler=Lore:]This card is used to Ritual Summon "Divine Sky Apoca Lypes". You must also Tribute monsters whose total Levels equal 10 or more from the Field or your Hand. If this is the top card of your Graveyard, you cannot conduct your Draw during your Draw Phase. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 *Facepalms TC You spelt "Apoca-Lypse wrong on the card name. Before I can help, please post the lore on the monster. Despite all you believe of yourself, your OCG is still off. I'll help however I am able once you get that lore up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 Also & In addition not needed... first of the effect is not need, cuz you said that it can only be Ritual Summoned. And actually... I can't see the apocalypse with this card... effect is simplu and dull and way too UPed... it can be attacked in the first turn of summon and then you loose your whole hand at the end phase... and the effect of ATK boost won't activate cuz the monster would be destroyed by battle... I suggest remaking the Idea Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted May 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 *Facepalms TC You spelt "Apoca-Lypse wrong on the card name. Before I can help' date=' please post the lore on the monster. Despite all you believe of yourself, your OCG is still off. I'll help however I am able once you get that lore up.[/quote'] my bad i forgot to post the lore cuz i have to post the cards using tinypic and it annoyes me, oops i did spell it wrong! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Altaïr Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 fieldhandother than that i dotn see anything else9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted May 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 *Facepalms TC You spelt "Apoca-Lypse wrong on the card name. Before I can help' date=' please post the lore on the monster. Despite all you believe of yourself, your OCG is still off. I'll help however I am able once you get that lore up.[/quote'] my bad i forgot to post the lore cuz i have to post the cards using tinypic and it annoyes me, oops i did spell it wrong! I DIDNT SPELL IT WRONG. I meant for it to be that way!fieldhandother than that i dotn see anything else9/10 lol, i had it correct before but something made me change it back to uppercase... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 field = Fieldhand = Hand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted May 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 Also & In addition not needed... first of the effect is not need' date=' cuz you said that it can only be Ritual Summoned. And actually... I can't see the apocalypse with this card... effect is simplu and dull and way too UPed... it can be attacked in the first turn of summon and then you loose your whole hand at the end phase... and the effect of ATK boost won't activate cuz the monster would be destroyed by battle... I suggest remaking the Idea[/quote'] how is it going to get destroyed? Its basically going to be used on a turn when you use the effect to get the powerboost by discarding the hand and then destroying speels/traps Apoca will gain ATk at the end of the first turnfield = Fieldhand = Hand i accidently did that when i was posting it, idk why i did it i feel stupid:P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 o.- [spoiler=Spam]Ima wanna to make my own card now. And it is going to be better than this.[/spoiler=] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted May 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 o.- [spoiler=Spam]Ima wanna to make my own card now. And it is going to be better than this.[/spoiler=] u do that and PM it to me, i want to see a card thats better and balanced though Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 Also & In addition not needed... first of the effect is not need' date=' cuz you said that it can only be Ritual Summoned. And actually... I can't see the apocalypse with this card... effect is simplu and dull and way too UPed... it can be attacked in the first turn of summon and then you loose your whole hand at the end phase... and the effect of ATK boost won't activate cuz the monster would be destroyed by battle... I suggest remaking the Idea[/quote'] how is it going to get destroyed? Its basically going to be used on a turn when you use the effect to get the powerboost by discarding the hand and then destroying speels/traps Apoca will gain ATk at the end of the first turn This won't last a turn... =/ that's why it's going to get destroyed... the only way it could survive attacking is if it attacks a Defense Position monster, Direct Attack or a monster with lower ATK. Lore:This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Lypes Calling of Retribution". When a card is sent to the Graveyard, this card gains 700 ATK for each card. During the End Phase of a turn that this card attacked, discard your entire hand and destroy a number of Spell or Trap Cards up to the number of cards you discarded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted May 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 Also & In addition not needed... first of the effect is not need' date=' cuz you said that it can only be Ritual Summoned. And actually... I can't see the apocalypse with this card... effect is simplu and dull and way too UPed... it can be attacked in the first turn of summon and then you loose your whole hand at the end phase... and the effect of ATK boost won't activate cuz the monster would be destroyed by battle... I suggest remaking the Idea[/quote'] how is it going to get destroyed? Its basically going to be used on a turn when you use the effect to get the powerboost by discarding the hand and then destroying speels/traps Apoca will gain ATk at the end of the first turn This won't last a turn... =/ that's why it's going to get destroyed... the only way it could survive attacking is if it attacks a Defense Position monster, Direct Attack or a monster with lower ATK. Lore:This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Lypes Calling of Retribution". When a card is sent to the Graveyard, this card gains 700 ATK for each card. During the End Phase of a turn that this card attacked, discard your entire hand and destroy a number of Spell or Trap Cards up to the number of cards you discarded. I still dont get it, what is it that will destroy it? The only prob i see with this card is that if you have no cards in ur hand after the summon and cannot draw due to spell. Im not getting how my moster will be destroyed!!! It doesnt say that anywhere in the effect. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 Also & In addition not needed... first of the effect is not need' date=' cuz you said that it can only be Ritual Summoned. And actually... I can't see the apocalypse with this card... effect is simplu and dull and way too UPed... it can be attacked in the first turn of summon and then you loose your whole hand at the end phase... and the effect of ATK boost won't activate cuz the monster would be destroyed by battle... I suggest remaking the Idea[/quote'] how is it going to get destroyed? Its basically going to be used on a turn when you use the effect to get the powerboost by discarding the hand and then destroying speels/traps Apoca will gain ATk at the end of the first turn This won't last a turn... =/ that's why it's going to get destroyed... the only way it could survive attacking is if it attacks a Defense Position monster, Direct Attack or a monster with lower ATK. Lore:This card can only be Ritual Summoned with the Ritual Spell Card "Lypes Calling of Retribution". When a card is sent to the Graveyard, this card gains 700 ATK for each card. During the End Phase of a turn that this card attacked, discard your entire hand and destroy a number of Spell or Trap Cards up to the number of cards you discarded. I still dont get it, what is it that will destroy it? The only prob i see with this card is that if you have no cards in ur hand after the summon and cannot draw due to spell. Im not getting how my moster will be destroyed!!! It doesnt say that anywhere in the effect. Do you know the Battle Phase.... or Spell & Trap Cards?...After I read the effect I thought "Great Beastick" but then I thought "Damn, it won't last a turn unless you protect it adn you'll loose your entire hand just for a boost? Hell no..." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
T3RA PROWL3R Posted May 2, 2010 Report Share Posted May 2, 2010 I am having problems w/ the uploader. I will instead post the original pic (the link) and all of the other stuff, and have you turn it into a card for me. How does that sound? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted May 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 I am having problems w/ the uploader. I will instead post the original pic (the link) and all of the other stuff' date=' and have you turn it into a card for me. How does that sound?[/quote'] Thats good To:wero vasto and i know the card is going to be hard to defend but the power boost may be worth it, anyways your likely going to be able to save some of the cards by just putting them facedown.I am having problems w/ the uploader. I will instead post the original pic (the link) and all of the other stuff' date=' and have you turn it into a card for me. How does that sound?[/quote'] Thats good To:wero vasto and i know the card is going to be hard to defend but the power boost may be worth it, anyways your likely going to be able to save some of the cards by just putting them facedown.It even allows destruction of Spell and trap cards for another bonus so for every card you discard it gains 1400 ATK and that stays that way until it gets destroyed Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted May 3, 2010 Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 BTW... do you know the last effect won't be applied unles there's a number of Spell & Traps Cards on the field equal to the number of Cards discarded.... TRUE it can gain an enourmous ATKTRUE it can be destroyed by everythingFALSE is that Great... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted May 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 BTW... do you know the last effect won't be applied unles there's a number of Spell & Traps Cards on the field equal to the number of Cards discarded.... TRUE it can gain an enourmous ATKTRUE it can be destroyed by everythingFALSE is that Great... NO' date=' it says [b']up to [/b]the number of cards you discardedThis deck would work good with Geartown OTK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted May 3, 2010 Report Share Posted May 3, 2010 TRUE it can gain an enourmous ATKTRUE it can be destroyed by everythingFALSE is that Great... I'll stop now... considering this SPAM If you want to continue... PM ... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tunerwizard Posted May 4, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 4, 2010 Nah, i will leave it alone i do not like arguements ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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