[Traceur] Didn't make a thread a while..Originality!! UPDATED!!

[.:Traceur:.]

This a new set I'm making. They are all Fiend-Type monsters cuz I had a lot of their pics..and they are based on skipping Phases to activate their effect...tell me if these cards are op'd..

 

 

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Lore: Once while you control this face-up card you can discard 1 card from your hand to skip your opponent's next Draw Phase.

 

 

Lore: This card can only be Special Summoned by skipping your Battle Phase. Once per turn you can add 1 Level 4 or lower Fiend-Type monster from your Graveyard to your hand. Each time this card destroys a monster your must discard 1 card.

 

 

Lore:When this card is Normal Summoned your opponent skips his/her next Battle Phase. Once per turn you can activate the following effect by skipping your.

•Main Phase 1: Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower Fiend-Type monster from your Deck.

•Battle Phase: Inflict damage to your opponent equal to the number of Fiend-Type monsters in your Graveyard x300.

•Draw Phase: Discard 1 card. Draw 2 cards.

 

 

Lore: You can discard this card to draw 1 card. While this card is in your Graveyard, each time you skip a Battle Phase draw 1 card.

 

 

Lore: You can send this card to the Graveyard to negate an attack. This card be Special Summoned from your Graveyard by skipping your Main Phase 1. When this card is destroyed your opponent skips his/her next Battle Phase.

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[pipipa]

Wow, I really like the pics, as for the actual cards, I think they seem quite OPed, for example, if you get Phaser Duke into a good position, you could virtually do a Yata-Garasu lockdown. If you have Duke on your side, your opponent has no monsters on their side, you could keep discarding to skip their phase. Maybe you should make it, ''Once per 2 or 3 turns" instead. As it is, 4/10

 

I like the effects of the General, although again I find him a little OPed, possibly by seperating both his add to hand AND opponents discarding effect into TWO seperate cards, with similar summoning condition of skipping your battle phase. As it is, 6/10

 

With the Phaser Prince, I love all of his effects, and find him the most balanced and interesting of your cards. As it is, 9/10

 

Overall I think your cards deserve a 6/10, but I think if you used a few of my suggestions to lower the power of these cards a little, I'd definately give a 8/10 or 9/10

[Mysterium Tremendum]

Very nice set,

o Innovative, its a good idea

o Great image choices, fits extremely well

o OCG.... perfect

o 9.9 / 10

[.:Traceur:.]

thanks guys..I think they are now more balanced..:D

[Parion555]

Very nice i like the Set but there are 2 things i noticed:

 

1-The 1st card seems a little overpowered,like you leave your opponent with the same hand without new strategies and you can protect this Monster with Cards like Negate Attack and like that constantly.It's basically like you are only giving up a card and your opponent is giving up new strategies.

2-It seems like you made them with Effects to stop your opponent's actions like turn skip and Battle stoppers.

 

But still it's a very nice set.9/10 just because of the First card.

[.:Traceur:.]

yes..the 1st card is op'd a lill bit..:D

but it would be banned or limited anyway..:D

[Parion555]

Guess you are Right about that.

[.:Traceur:.]

maybe..anyway did Fayat send you his card?

[Parion555]

Well he sent me what it should look like but he said he needs to make a few Adjustments and then he will post it.I'm sure he'll post it before the end of tomorrow.

[.:Traceur:.]

ok..now guys rate..:D

[.:Traceur:.]

bump

[Ghoulish]

Nice cards, pics are great, original for sure, the first card is the main problem for me however as the ocg isnt quite write maybe it should be " Once while you control this face-up card you can discard 1 card from your hand to skip your opponent's next Draw Phase." but i dunno i think this way its more balanced.

ratings about to be posted

[.:Traceur:.]

thanks..will fix it..:D

[Ghoulish]

originality 3/3 (for sure, great concept)

picture 2/2 (suit the cards well)

name 1/1 (fancy and different)

effect 2.5/3 (mainly cause of the first card)

OCG 2.5/3 (first card)

balance 2.5/3 (first card again)

useful 2/2 (can be very efefctive)

Overall idea 3/3 (well thought out on both strengths and weaknesses)

Total : 18.5/20 (really like it mainly due tot he originality as that is what i think seperates top sets to bad sets, cant wait to see the rest)

[.:Traceur:.]

thanks..:D

[jack781217]

9/10

very original effects, interesting as well

must be devastating when combining with Dark World cards

[studs]

how do you get cards on here

[.:Traceur:.]

thanks..:D

and studs don't spam..ask that in the question thread..

[Protoman]

IMO I think Duke should either be another level higher if its going to keep its current effect. Reason being that you could easily abuse his ability or as someone before me posted make the time period in which you can use the effect longer. Over all nice cards. They would also go well with the Infernity's due to their no hand ability and that your cards involve discarding. Keep up the good work.

[~Shin~]

[spoiler=duke]

"Once while you control this face-up card" so I can only use it once from its summoning until it is removed from field ?!

...that is all.

my rate 7.9/10.

 

[spoiler=general]

you wrote "your must discard 1 card".

it is a nice card I like it so my rate is 9/10... it is hard to give 10.

 

[spoiler=prince]

shouldn't you change its ATK/DEF I mean he is level 7.

isn't 300 damage is alot ?! I mean if you have 3=900 5=1500 7=2100 and you can send more by its last effect.. all the other things are great so i will give it 9/10.

 

I like your main idea and hope to see more of this cards soon.

[.:Traceur:.]

IMO I think Duke should either be another level higher if its going to keep its current effect. Reason being that you could easily abuse his ability or as someone before me posted make the time period in which you can use the effect longer. Over all nice cards. They would also go well with the Infernity's due to their no hand ability and that your cards involve discarding. Keep up the good work.

thanks..will fix him..:D

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[spoiler=duke]

"Once while you control this face-up card" so I can only use it once from its summoning until it is removed from field ?!

...that is all.

my rate 7.9/10.

 

[spoiler=general]

you wrote "your must discard 1 card".

it is a nice card I like it so my rate is 9/10... it is hard to give 10.

 

[spoiler=prince]

shouldn't you change its ATK/DEF I mean he is level 7.

isn't 300 damage is alot ?! I mean if you have 3=900 5=1500 7=2100 and you can send more by its last effect.. all the other things are great so i will give it 9/10.

 

I like your main idea and hope to see more of this cards soon.

 

the ATK/DEF of prince are low 'cause that balances him..when the atk would be higher he would be op'd..

[.:Traceur:.]

bump

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[.:Traceur:.]

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[.:Traceur:.]

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