Jean Paul the Desert Dragon + Jean Paul Hammer

[byak]

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When this card is Tribute Summoned' date=' Special Summon 2 "Totem Tokens" (Rock-Type/EARTH/Level 1/ATK 0/DEF 0) in Defense Position. "Totem Tokens" cannot be Tributed the turn they are Summoned. As long as you control "Totem Tokens", your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card gains 300 ATK for each "Totem Token" you control. Once per turn, you can remove from play 1 monster from your Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Totem Token".[/quote']

 

Tribute 1 "Jean Paul the Desert Dragon" you control. Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard except "Jean Paul the Desert Dragon" and equip it with this card. A monster equipped with this card gains 300 ATK for each "Totem Token" you control. When this card is sent to the Graveyard' date=' you can Tribute 1 "Totem Token" you control to Special Summon 1 "Jean Paul the Desert Dragon" from your Graveyard.[/quote'][/align]

 

Coincidentally works with Totem Dragon.

[destron]

I'd say its balanced, but if those Tokens can be Tributed, that would make it OP'd.

 

Why Jean Paul?

 

Interesting idea.

 

Slight OCG errors, such as tribute = Tribute, I think.

 

8.5/10

[byak]

I'd say its balanced' date=' but if those Tokens can be Tributed, that would make it OP'd.

 

Why Jean Paul?

 

Interesting idea.

 

Slight OCG errors, such as tribute = Tribute, I think.

 

[b']8.5/10[/b]

 

I always mess up tribute... D:

 

And, maybe I could make them like Dandylion tokens, not being able to be tributed on the turn they're summoned.

[destron]

That works.

 

I'll raise to 9.5/10