earthbound immortal yuraq aculla

[zancrow the flame god]

my immortal. please rate and comment! pic from Radiant F.U.R.Y.™

card lore: There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there is no face-up Field Spell Card on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. Once per turn, while this card is face-up on the field, you can negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters and end their Battle Phase.

[WithTheWind]

Wow, this card is amazing. Great job on the effect and the grammar.

[pipipa]

Capitilize the B in Beast-type

 

Overall I like the effect. 8/10

[Actor22295]

a little OPed if you ask me, maybe decrease his attack down a little or take out the pat of destroying every card except it. other then that great pic and everything 10/10

[Excallibur]

10/10 flawless kinda bland but i always liked earthbound immortals.

[gwarg1]

Perfect 10/10.

[luutrantrunghieu]

Nice card!

9/10

[Morgan LeFlay]

Okay so it's an Earthbound Immortal with an infused XX-Saber Fulhelmknight effect to protect your other monsters (which is all they can attack unless they have a monster like Jinzo #7). It's also a once-effect which is why maybe I don't like it so much.

 

It might be able to get off with once per turn, given the nature of Earthbound Immortals, and I don't think it would be overpowered that way. Or give it something else, it's underpowered IMO.

 

Good pic though...

 

All included, 7/10

[zancrow the flame god]

Perfect 10/10.

 

thanks

[DX DX USER]

Did you draw the monster? It's really good.

11/10

[pyro1008]

oh thats a good card 10/10

[NeXodus]

OCG is bad. But not terrible.

Allow me to fix:

There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there are no face-up Field Spell on the field, destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. Once, while this card is face-up on the field, you can negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters.

 

That's all I can fix. I can't seem to fix some that don't seem right to me...

The pic is a little blurry.

But the card s OP'ed.

Effect wise.

There's only one drawback but there are some oped effects. Such as attacking you opponent directly. I mean the card has a ATK of 2950! Plus you can't destroy it by battle. It's impossible.

Overall. 6/10

[Slicer224]

Nice job though I agree it's a little bland 8/10

[Guest Zeonark]

But the card s OP'ed.

Effect wise.

There's only one drawback but there are some oped effects. Such as attacking you opponent directly. I mean the card has a ATK of 2950! Plus you can't destroy it by battle. It's impossible.

 

Lol.

Earthbound Immortals all have these effects.

 

OT:

Basically, Guy said what I wanted to say. Since it's only one time, I don't really like it too much. Maybe make it "Once per turn" instead of "Once"?

[T3RA PROWL3R]

OCG is bad. But not terrible.

Allow me to fix:

There can only be 1 face-up "Earthbound Immortal" monster on the field. If there are no face-up Field Spell on the field' date=' destroy this card. Your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. This card can attack your opponent directly. Once, while this card is face-up on the field, you can negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters.

 

That's all I can fix. I can't seem to fix some that don't seem right to me...

The pic is a little blurry.

But the card s OP'ed.

Effect wise.

There's only one drawback but there are some oped effects. Such as attacking you opponent directly. I mean the card has a ATK of 2950! Plus you can't destroy it by battle. It's impossible.

Overall. 6/10

[/quote']

 

"Are" in your fix should be "Is".

 

Read the other Earthbound Immortal Cards. They have the same effects, except for the last one. I would change it to "Once per turn", because if you had it only once, it wouldn't make a difference at all. This is actually way better than the other EBI's, because the pic is awesome (where did you get it?), effect is a lot more useful (not as much as the whale tho), etc.

 

But, if you do change it to "Once per turn", I would suggest lowering its ATK to 2500-2600 because of its negating effect.

 

You could also scrap the negating effect, and say:

"Your opponent must Set Spell Cards before they can be activated."

 

Overall: 8.5/10

[.:Blu:.]

I think you should just make its ATK an even 2900 or 3000. Good card althought that last part should be:

 

While this card is face-up on the field, you can negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters. This effect can only be used once.

 

Either that or do you mean "Once per turn"

 

8/10

[zancrow the flame god]

I think you should just make its ATK an even 2900 or 3000. Good card althought that last part should be:

 

While this card is face-up on the field' date=' you can negate the attack of 1 of your opponent's monsters. This effect can only be used once.

 

Either that or do you mean "Once per turn"

 

8/10

[/quote']

i meant once per turn

[Hollow Ichigo!]

Its beastly lol 100/10

[Monkey]

Compared to other EBI's, this one sucks

[zancrow the flame god]

Compared to other EBI's' date=' this one sucks

[/quote']

 

your entitled to your opinion, so i won't argue with you

[Monkey]

Maybe give it a stronger effect, look at the other EBI's and see how powerful they are. Then amp this one up

[zancrow the flame god]

Maybe give it a stronger effect' date=' look at the other EBI's and see how powerful they are. Then amp this one up

[/quote']

he's a negater not an attacker

[zancrow the flame god]

bump

[Darj]

Way too high ATK; considering its stalling effect, I would lower it to 2000.

And Final Countdown Decks would love this card.

[zancrow the flame god]

Way too high ATK; considering its stalling effect' date=' I would lower it to 2000.

And Final Countdown Decks would love this card.

[/quote']

alright, changed him a bit, now he's not as big and scary