DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 22, 2010 Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 It's impossible to post this long story in here. So I'm going to send this link to a dead branch site I made, where I still have the Testaments of Extrarius.http://www.thewritersworkshop.mybbest.com/thread-101.htmlNow, please post the feedback here, not in the other place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 22, 2010 Look above. Please post the feedback here, not in the url place; that place is dead, and most likely you wouldn't want to make an account there just for this purpose. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 what, noone...? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
legendhiro Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 seems interesting. i've only read chapter one, but i do plan to read more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 thx ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great Unclean One: VK Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 Interesting. Somewhat confusing though, then again, I was reading it during midnight and high on sugar. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 thx ^^ I'll try to make it less confusing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 how many times do I have to bump? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Well like legendhiro said, it's interesting until now, of course there are 2 Chapters for now but i think that this will be an interesting story.Anyhow my Rating.Since i don't see anything wrong i guess 10/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Master of Chaos™ Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 your argument is invalid May i ask what does mean or were you just trying to be rude? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Congratulations, you have been commented on by me. You need more chapters. Badly. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 Congratulations' date=' you have been commented on by me. You need more chapters. Badly.[/quote'] I amz making moar nowz. Thx Light ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 28, 2010 Zeriouslyz. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Stigma_Horrizone Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 interesting, i cant wait for more Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great Unclean One: VK Posted May 29, 2010 Report Share Posted May 29, 2010 I require moar chapters to read. Seriously. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 Making them now... I just like editing many times before posting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted May 30, 2010 Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 Making them now... I just like editing many times before posting. Editing is bad. NO editing! Real writers don't need to edit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Great Unclean One: VK Posted May 30, 2010 Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 Making them now... I just like editing many times before posting. That's a good thing, your refining them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bury the year Posted May 30, 2010 Report Share Posted May 30, 2010 Making them now... I just like editing many times before posting. Editing is bad. NO editing! Real writers don't need to edit. LIES. Ever heard of a rough draft versus a final draft? If you post the first thing you have without checking for mistakes, you will have some, maybe even a really big one. Editing is GOOD. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Making them now... I just like editing many times before posting. Editing is bad. NO editing! Real writers don't need to edit. LIES. Ever heard of a rough draft versus a final draft? If you post the first thing you have without checking for mistakes' date=' you will have some, maybe even a really big one. Editing is GOOD.[/quote'] Should I have put a little white [/sarcasm] tag after that? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Making them now... I just like editing many times before posting. Editing is bad. NO editing! Real writers don't need to edit. LIES. Ever heard of a rough draft versus a final draft? If you post the first thing you have without checking for mistakes' date=' you will have some, maybe even a really big one. Editing is GOOD.[/quote'] Should I have put a little white [/sarcasm] tag after that? I simply know that you have no right to call yourself a writer. Unless that itself's sarcasm. Or you're trying to become a Fan Fic yugiohoverlord. In the case in which you'll get banned soon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fakecardmaker222 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Good work 9/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Making them now... I just like editing many times before posting. Editing is bad. NO editing! Real writers don't need to edit. LIES. Ever heard of a rough draft versus a final draft? If you post the first thing you have without checking for mistakes' date=' you will have some, maybe even a really big one. Editing is GOOD.[/quote'] Should I have put a little white [/sarcasm] tag after that? I simply know that you have no right to call yourself a writer. Unless that itself's sarcasm. Or you're trying to become a Fan Fic yugiohoverlord. In the case in which you'll get banned soon. Here, let's try this one more time:Editing is bad. NO editing! Real writers don't need to edit.([/sarcasm]) And, as fascinating as a yugiohoverlord in the Fan Fic section would be, I think I'll stick to being Dr. Cakey. I just don't have yugiohoverlord's charisma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DARKPLANT RISING Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 ...Good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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