Fanged Dragon Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 I found out how to make cards look holographic so I made this card. Any feedback is welcome. Effect: "Armed Dragon LV10" + "Red Eyes Darkness Dragon"This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by Fusion Summon with the above Fusion Material Monsters. Once per turn, you can activate 1 of the following effects: • Discard 1 monster card from your hand. This cards gains ATK equal to the discarded monsters ATK until the end of the End Phase. • Discard 1 card from your hand to destory all monsters your opponent controls. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Krokosaurus Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 First of all, how did you holo the stars and the attribute? You should make a tutorial! Then, please write out the lore so others can correct your OCG. The OCG itself looks very good and the pic with the holo is very cool. To the effect: it looks a bit OPed to me. You should change two things: You increase the ATK by 700 for every discarded card and for the second effect you should change that you inflict only half of the ATK as damage. If you change these two things I´ll rate9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mahboi99 Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 10000000000000000000000000/10'nuff said Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanged Dragon Posted May 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 First of all' date=' how did you holo the stars and the attribute? You should make a tutorial! Then, please write out the lore so others can correct your OCG. The OCG itself looks very good and the pic with the holo is very cool. To the effect: it looks a bit OPed to me. You should change two things: You increase the ATK by 700 for every discarded card and for the second effect you should change that you inflict only half of the ATK as damage. If you change these two things I´ll rate9.9/10[/quote'] I made the stars and attribute holo by cutting circle shapes out of the original holosheet I used for the pic. I've fixed the card now to make it less OPed, thanks for the feedback.10000000000000000000000000/10'nuff said Thanks a lot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thatisnotwhatshesaid714 Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 nice 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanged Dragon Posted May 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 nice 10/10 Thanks =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 OMG~!!! You duzn't liek Mudkipz? Now on topic, I think the DEF damage should have a little less cost. Does the ATK stay the same for more than 1 turn? 10/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanged Dragon Posted May 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 OMG~!!! You duzn't liek Mudkipz? Now on topic' date=' I think the DEF damage should have a little less cost. Does the ATK stay the same for more than 1 turn? 10/10[/quote'] I prefer swampert =P Yeah, it probably should but I can't be bothered to edit it again, takes ages holo it all again lol. The ATK stays the same all the time until you decided to change it again, but it wouldn't gain ATK it would just change to the amount of cards discarded. Thanks for the feedback =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 I think it's UP'ed. With such Fusion Materials, I was expecting the Fusion to have insane ATK (about 4000, and not by effect) and a destruction effect inherited from the Armed Dragon. Instead you came up with a monster whose ATK has a high cost (your hand) and that inflicts Effect Damage. "Armed Dragon LV 10" alone can inflict more damage than your Fusion. Also, its Level is 10, the same as the Armed Dragon. Being a Fusion between 2 high-level monsters, shouldn't its level be higher? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Card_Critic24 Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 *gasps* Wow! First I've seen of that! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zektor Posted May 23, 2010 Report Share Posted May 23, 2010 6.5/10 DEF should be 3500effect:where the dots are each one should be on a different lineand instead of x700 x1000take out the paying life points partalso the stars are a little messed up with the holo on the 2 closest to the left Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanged Dragon Posted May 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2010 *gasps* Wow! First I've seen of that! Well its nothing newI think it's UP'ed. With such Fusion Materials' date=' I was expecting the Fusion to have insane ATK (about 4000, and not by effect) and a destruction effect inherited from the Armed Dragon. Instead you came up with a monster whose ATK has a high cost (your hand) and that inflicts Effect Damage. "Armed Dragon LV 10" alone can inflict more damage than your Fusion. Also, its Level is 10, the same as the Armed Dragon. Being a Fusion between 2 high-level monsters, shouldn't its level be higher?[/quote'] I've totally changed the effect, simply because someone before said its OPed, so I changed it slightly, then you said its UPed so whatever... Also, I think 11 stars would be too many, Rainbow Neos is fused with a level 10 monster and its not level 11 or 12.6.5/10 DEF should be 3500effect:where the dots are each one should be on a different lineand instead of x700 x1000take out the paying life points partalso the stars are a little messed up with the holo on the 2 closest to the left I've changed the effect now. About the stars, well I'm not perfect I tried to get it the best I could. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanged Dragon Posted May 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Bump, changed the effect, any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Make this card Level 11 or 12, not 10. The effect are good though. You could have made so that you can either Summon REDD or AD10 when it is destroyed. The holo is good 9/10 good job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jamesgent111 Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 amazing holo skills and a very hard to get out card but all in all its a 9/10 from me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanged Dragon Posted May 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 Make this card Level 11 or 12' date=' not 10. The effect are good though. You could have made so that you can either Summon REDD or AD10 when it is destroyed. The holo is good 9/10 good job[/quote'] I suppose I could make it Level 11 or 12 but this means more editing GARRGH! Thanks for the comment.amazing holo skills and a very hard to get out card but all in all its a 9/10 from me Thanks for the feedback =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Squirrel Girl Posted May 25, 2010 Report Share Posted May 25, 2010 No problem for commenting on the card Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fanged Dragon Posted May 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 26, 2010 Bump, any more comments? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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