Hi! This is my first card. Hope you like it.. please help me about OCG!

[vanket]

Effect:When this card is successfully synchro summoned in the field, pay half of your life points. Removed from play all your monster in your deck, hand, field and graveyard except this monster. Multiply the number of removed cards by 300 and add it to the attack of the monster. During the battle phase it can attack the opponent directly twice. At the end of the turn that this card is synchro summon destroy this card and remove it from play.

[MibeR]

When this card is Synchro Summoned, pay half of your Life Points. Remove from play all of your monsters from your Deck, hand, field and Graveyard except this card. Increase this card ATK for each removed from play cards by this effect x 300. During each of your Battle Phase, this card can attack the opponent directly twice. Remove this card from play during the End Phase of that turn.

 

its little oped, cz it can twice combined with added ATK ,since u new.its alright..

 

hope the ocg help u

[vanket]

tnx for the help,,..

i like the way u revise it.. tnx again .. ur ocg is very good..

:)

[Dries965]

what are the requirements, and remove the space between requirements and effect

[NeXodus]

I will help a little:

 

1. OCG is bad, look up a thread an learn from it. >:(

2. Dark Synchros aren't allowed in the Realistic Card Section. Get this moved.

3. You don't need a space between the monsters and the effect.

4. Way, WAY to overpowered for this card can get over 4000 ATK plus it can attack twice.

That's almost an OTK.

 

It's decent for a newbie but it needs alot of work.