OCG Help Very Needed!!

[Rosuke]

Hi ^^^i will post new cards i maded but it Haves a lot of OCG Errors..

 

 

 

Lore : You can Activate This card by Discarding 1 Card in your Hand , You can Special Summon from your Deck or Hand 1``Dokura- No-Soul Man`` This card Effect Cant be Negated by a Spell or a Trap card.

 

Lore:This card is Treated as a Fiend Type Monster and Can Only Be Summoned By The Effect of ``Unmasking a Demon``. When This Card is Summoned Increase this Card Atk and Def Equal to a Monster in Your Hand , When That Monster is Discarded from your Hand or Summoned , Decrease This Card Atk and Def to 0 ,When this card is destroyed by Battle Add 1 ``Unmasking a Demon`` from your Graveyard or Deck to your Hand. The turn This card is Destroyed every Damage you Receive is 0 This Effect cant be Negated.

 

 

 

The First who Help my with the OCG Will gain 3 Reps.

[Darj]

Unmasking a Demon:

Discard 1 card. Special Summon 1 "Dokura- No-Soul Man" from your hand or Deck. This card's effect cannot be negated by the effect of a Spell or Trap card.

 

Dokura:

This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Unmasking a Demon". This card is also treated as Fiend-Type. When this card is Summoned, select 1 Monster Card in your hand. The ATK and DEF of this card becomes equal to the ATK and DEF of the selected monster. When the selected monster is summoned or discarded, the ATK and DEF of this card becomes 0. When this card is destroyed by battle, add 1 "Unmasking a Demon" from your Graveyard or Deck to your hand. During the turn this card is destroyed, any damage you receive becomes 0. The activation of this effect cannot be negated.