wero-vasto Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 [align=center] [/align] 2 reasons for not posting the Lore:1. The Lore is perfectly readable.2. I'm not asking for OCG fixes... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jolta Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 A planet? Two planets? Or something else? Whichever Decks run these have their own Kristya now. This is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 You might wanna change your wording. The first line on the first card isn't continuous. So just wondering, were you going for that? Otherwise, they're nice. Also, your cards reminded me of this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 A planet? Two planets? Or something else? Whichever Decks run these have their own Kristya now. This is good. Sodoma and Gomorra are two cities of the Bible that were destroyed due it's Sins... You might wanna change your wording. The first line on the first card isn't continuous. So just wondering' date=' were you going for that? Otherwise, they're nice. Also, your cards reminded me of this. True, didn't notice that... Wording suggestion? Fixing it tomorrow ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 holy cow...these cards are very goodjust one thing shouldn't affect be affected?other than that i really don't know what to say about these cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 holy cow...these cards are very goodjust one thing shouldn't affect be affected?other than that i really don't know what to say about these cards True, still is not a major error cuz you can understand it ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inferno I20 Posted May 31, 2010 Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 sure why not :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted May 31, 2010 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2010 Fix'd... thought IDK if that right .__. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Really? No more comments? YCM I'm getting dissapointed... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hymn Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 You may not need OCG fixes, but you need to proofread both effects. There are three instances of incorrect grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 You may not need OCG fixes' date=' but you need to proofread both effects. There are three instances of incorrect grammar.[/quote'] It would lovely that when you say something about Grammar give the errors and so...and comment on the effect of the card and not just the Grammar, OCG & Pic...right now your post is just a +1post and somehow SPAM... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hymn Posted June 1, 2010 Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 You may not need OCG fixes' date=' but you need to proofread both effects. There are three instances of incorrect grammar.[/quote'] It would lovely that when you say something about Grammar give the errors and so...and comment on the effect of the card and not just the Grammar, OCG & Pic...right now your post is just a +1post and somehow SPAM... Hardly. If you actually took the time to re-read your cards you'd know what I'm talking about, instead of instantly getting offended at what I said. If you want me to point out the errors, take the extra tenth of a second to copy and paste the lores here for me. But I shouldn't need them, because like I said, if you went back and looked at your cards they'd be instantly noticeable. It's called "apostrophe 's'". Go look at your cards and if you don't see it either enroll yourself into a third grade English class or stop making cards. Either way, I'll gladly point the errors out to you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 You may not need OCG fixes' date=' but you need to proofread both effects. There are three instances of incorrect grammar.[/quote'] It would lovely that when you say something about Grammar give the errors and so...and comment on the effect of the card and not just the Grammar, OCG & Pic...right now your post is just a +1post and somehow SPAM... 1.Hardly. If you actually took the time to re-read your cards you'd know what I'm talking about, instead of instantly getting offended at what I said. 2.If you want me to point out the errors, take the extra tenth of a second to copy and paste the lores here for me. But I shouldn't need them, because like I said, if you went back and looked at your cards they'd be instantly noticeable. 3.It's called "apostrophe 's'". Go look at your cards and if you don't see it either enroll yourself into a third grade English class or stop making cards. Either way, I'll gladly point the errors out to you. 1. I'm not offended of what you said ^^2. For Grammar errors the Lore isn't necessary...3. Last Level of English Monsieur, the Human kind isn't perfect, and thanks that my first language isn't English I should make some errors. And, again, I'll be glad if you read the rules... - Anyone posting JUST the OCG correction will receive a stern warning. Repeaters will be banned. Again, you're not commenting on the card itself, just on the Grammar and/or OCG... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted June 1, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2010 Really? BUMP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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