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TELL ME IF THIS IS OP"ED!! please


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Effect: Seems a bit OP'd, or better yet, one-sided. If you're going to place a restriction, it should probably be a blanket restriction. Otherwise, bombing their monsters is a bit extreme. That being said, this is original. So kudos for that. (2 points)

 

Grammar: Needs work. Should read:

"If your opponent draws more than 3 cards in a single turn, destroy all monsters he/she controls."

But you weren't really off, and you're new, so it's cool. (2 points)

 

Picture: A bit cartoony. Goes with the card name, but I personally don't like the feel of it. (1 point)

 

Overall: This card has potential. It didn't sit right with me, but I'm just one person. Still, not a bad card, and not a bad idea. 5/10.

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Actually, I kind of like it. I don't think it would be run too often, but I do kind of like it. The one thing I'm not clear on is if you intended for the normal Draw Phase draw to count toward this card's activation. If you do, it should be written:

"Activate only during a turn your opponent drew 3 or more cards. Destroy all monsters your opponent controls."

 

If it isn't supposed to include the Draw Phase, then it should be something like:

"Activate only during a turn your opponent drew 3 or more cards outside of their normal Draw Phase. Destroy all monsters your opponent controls."

 

I recommend the first myself. Your opponent is rarely going to draw 3 cards from effects, but just about every deck has a draw 2, and 2 drawn cards + 1 from draw phase fulfills the activation requirements.

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