Tar Pit [Continuous Spell]

[redrage1993]

 

Effect:

During each of your Standby Phases, remove from play 1 Dinosaur-Type monster on your side of the field or in your Graveyard to place 1 counter on this card (max 5). If you do not, destroy this card. You can add to your hand a card that has been removed from play by removing from play this card with 5 counters on it.

 

Please comment and rate.

EDIT: Incorporated the changes suggested by xzMasteRzx while using Skilled Dark Magician as a basis.

[~Umbreon~]

5/10

[xzMasteRzx]

This card is very useful. You can remove certain Dinos from play to utilize effects that start devestating combos. Also, this card can be used to Special Summon 1 Uber monster that'll rip apart your opponent. Not only that but this card can be used to gain counters and put them somewhere else to utlize effects. All in all, this card is a great combo starter and menace to the opponent in almost any deck, so it is quite stupid and noobish to say this is a "5/10" when this card is this good. The picture is also very fitting and tittle matches the effect. The OCG however is a little off, but that is a small flaw and shall not effect my rating.

 

Score: 10/10

[The Great Wolf Sif]

All ready been said great job. 10/10

[redrage1993]

This card is very useful. You can remove certain Dinos from play to utilize effects that start devestating combos. Also' date=' this card can be used to Special Summon 1 Uber monster that'll rip apart your opponent. Not only that but this card can be used to gain counters and put them somewhere else to utlize effects. All in all, this card is a great combo starter and menace to the opponent in almost any deck, so it is quite stupid and noobish to say this is a "5/10" when this card is this good. The picture is also very fitting and tittle matches the effect. The OCG however is a little off, but that is a small flaw and shall not effect my rating.

 

Score: 10/10

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Would you mind pointing out the errors in the OCG?

[xzMasteRzx]

During your Standby Phase you must remove from play 1 Dinosaur-Type monster or send this card to the Graveyard. When a monster is removed from play due to this card's effect, put one counter on this card. When there are five counters on this card, you may remove this card from play to return 1 card that has been removed from play to your hand.

 

My Correction:

During each of your Standby Phases, you must remove from play 1 Dinosaur-Type monster. If you do not, destroy this card. When a monster is removed from play due to this card's effect, put one counter on this card. While this card has 5 counters on it, you can remove this card from play to return 1 card that has been removed from play to your hand.

 

I don't everything that's wrong with it but that's what I see.

[Gastonia]

on most cards with spell counters there is a max like on:

 

but that isn't going to effect my rating. 10/10

[|Strawberrys|]

it's a good card, loves a d.d dino deck, doesn't need a max as it activates it's effect at a certain amount all in all, 9.1/10

[xzMasteRzx]

Gastonia gave a good reference. Look at that last sentence and notice where your effect went wrong.

[redrage1993]

I added xzMasteRzx's suggestions and changed the card effect.

 

Does this require use of the card the turn the fifth counter is placed on the card or can the effect be stalled until needed?

 

If it does require the use, is it limiting the effect too much?

[FriendlyHost]

8/10 cool concept

[Darj]

How is this card useful? It only removes Dinosaur monsters with no benefits other than recovering 1 of them after 5th turn, and only if the card survives in the field.

Plus, from where do you have to remove the monsters? from the field? form the Graveyard?

 

I guess you could use it for removing your opponent's Dinosaurs and then stealing 1, but chances are your opponent won't be running Dinos. You would have to combine this card with DNA Surgery.

[redrage1993]

How is this card useful? It only removes Dinosaur monsters with no benefits other than recovering 1 of them after 5th turn' date=' and only if the card survives in the field.

Plus, from where do you have to remove the monsters? from the field? form the Graveyard?

 

I guess you could use it for removing [b']your opponent's[/b] Dinosaurs and then stealing 1, but chances are your opponent won't be running Dinos. You would have to combine this card with DNA Surgery.

 

This card is useful when using Tyranno Infinity,

Example: Remove 4 Dynos and a Tyranno Infinity, return Tyranno Infinity to your hand, then summon a 4000 ATK Tyranno Infinity.

 

I forgot to specify that you remove the monsters from the field or graveyard. I'll fix that right now.

[Clair]

This card is useless. Firstly, Dinosaurs are one of the least supported Types in the entire game, and this card is just too slow to make them viable. At the cost of removing 5 Dinosaurs, you get 1 back? It doesn't seem like a good trade, and IMO, your opponent will kill you before you even get a chance to retrieve a Dino.

 

Different Dimension Reincarnation does this better.

[killa210]

UBER nice card<3 i love it <3 10/10 budday :D

[Ghoulish]

Maybe call the counters Tar Counters or summfin.

ocg:

"During your Standby Phases, remove from play 1 Dinosaur-Type monster you control or from your Graveyard and place 1 Tar Counter to this card (max 5). If you do not, destroy this card. During your Main Phase you can remove this card from play with 5 counters on it, to add 1 of your removed from play Dinosaur-Type monsters removed from play by this card's effect."

this card is a great asset support for Tyranno inifnity and the naeme and pic suits dinosaur types very well good work.

[Darj]

So this card was designed for "Tyranno Infinity"? In that case there are way better cards for helping that monster. "Dimensional Fissure" anyone?

[Ghoulish]

its just eatra support, of course theres better cards for it, but this s just support