Imaginitive, My Ultimate Set [2/???] 2 New Cards! :3

[ShootingTheMoon]

[align=center]Imaginitive is the set where ANYTHING can happen. This deck is "decked" with cards with effects that are completely different and cards with whose effects are very similar. I firmly believe this is going to be a best set. Image credit goes to HP Doom and Alcander (He's in some of the later cards)

 

[spoiler=EN000, Imaginitive City]

LORE: All "Imaginitive" monsters in your control gain 500 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. When this card is destroyed, all cards that gained ATK due to this card's effect is destroyed.

 

 

 

[spoiler=EN001, Imaginitive Dragon]

LORE:This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. During each Standby Phase this card is face-up, it gains 500 ATK. When this card is destroyed, you take as much damage as you gained in ATK. This card cannot attack directly.

 

 

 

 

NOTE: Please don't post harsh critisism. I tried my hardest on these, and post OCG corrections if needed.

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[lolwhy]

First, I believe it's spelled "Imaginative".

 

Second:

LORE: All "Imaginitive" monsters in your control gain 500 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. When this card is destroyed, all cards that gained ATK due to this card's effect is destroyed.

 

Change to:

All "Imaginative" monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. When this card is destroyed, destroy all "Imaginative" monsters on your side of the field.

-Since you're designating an archetype, you might as well destroy that archetype on the field.

 

Third:

LORE:This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. During each Standby Phase this card is face-up, it gains 500 ATK. When this card is destroyed, you take as much damage as you gained in ATK. This card cannot attack directly.

 

Change to:

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. While this card is face-up, increase this card's ATK by 500 at each Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed, you lose Life Points equal to the ATK of this card. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

 

?/10. Still underdeveloped.

 

P.S. The cards are OP'd. +500 at you and your opponent's Standby Phase or just yours? @.@

[Ghoulish]

not to sure atm, it seems at this point their main efects are atk gain? ill have to see more cards, ocg been fixed.

[ShootingTheMoon]

Its meant to be misspelled.

These monsters are meant to gain large numbers of ATK points.

[Adogadog8]

What's the point than? They should be made to be as powerful as possible without being OP'ed. Oh, and it's not as a result of battle, it's by battle

[Dr. Cakey]

First' date=' I believe it's spelled "Imaginative".

 

Second:

LORE: All "Imaginitive" monsters in your control gain 500 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. When this card is destroyed, all cards that gained ATK due to this card's effect is destroyed.

 

Change to:

All "Imaginative" monsters on your side of the field gain 500 ATK during each of your Standby Phases. When this card is destroyed, destroy all "Imaginative" monsters on your side of the field.

-Since you're designating an archetype, you might as well destroy that archetype on the field.

 

Third:

LORE:This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. During each Standby Phase this card is face-up, it gains 500 ATK. When this card is destroyed, you take as much damage as you gained in ATK. This card cannot attack directly.

 

Change to:

This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle. While this card is face-up, increase this card's ATK by 500 at each Standby Phase. When this card is destroyed, you lose Life Points equal to the ATK of this card. This card cannot attack your opponent's Life Points directly.

 

?/10. Still underdeveloped.

 

P.S. The cards are OP'd. +500 at you and your opponent's Standby Phase or just yours? @.@

 

Bad OCG is one thing. When the corrections are worse than the original, it's quite another. Learn from an obsessive:

 

Imaginitive City:

Once per turn, during your Standby Phase, all "Imaginitive" monsters you control gain 500 ATK. When this card is destroyed, destroy all monsters that gained ATK by this effect.

 

Imaginitive Dragon

This card cannot be destroyed by battle. This card cannot attack directly. During your Standby Phase, this card gains 500 ATK. When this card is destroyed, you take damage equal to its ATK.

 

And here are my thoughts. Imaginitive City is a little iffy in terms of how its effect works. I might try something like this: "During your Standby Phase, place 1 Imaginitive Counter on this card. All "Imaginitive" monsters you control gain 500 ATK for each Imaginitive Counter on this card." And this card isn't as powerful as you think. I recommend the destruction backlash to be more like: "When this card is destroyed, you take 500 damage for each Imaginitive Counter that was on this card." You could do 700, 800, or even 1000 instead, if you prefer.

 

Imaginitive Dragon feels like a card you'd want to have multiples of in this deck, but all monsters that can't be destroyed in battle are Limited (Besides a few, like The Fool and Darkness Neosphere). You could try something like "Once per turn, when this card would be destroyed by battle, it is not destroyed." Or you could do two times per turn, OR "While this card is in Attack Position, it cannot be destroyed by battle." <-Personally, I like this one. Also, you can cut the line "This card cannot attack directly." Aside from the indestructible bit that I covered, your dragon isn't OP'd at all. He has a right to attack directly.

If you want to use Imaginitive Counters on City, you should probably do it for the dragon as well. Then when it's destroyed, you can take damage equal to the counters x 500, IF you're going to keep the backlash, which I wouldn't. Think about it, even with Imaginitive City in play, it will only have 1000 ATK the turn after it's summoned. Sure, after a few turns it will be very powerful, but that requires Imaginitive City - otherwise, the dragon will be mostly useless for 3 turns.

[ShootingTheMoon]

Uber Bumpage.