Demon From The Void Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Any OCG errors? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
guskooyman Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 You forgot [Dark Magician] + [black Luster Soldier] right before the effect description. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 It's not [Dark Magician] + [black Luster Soldier] but "Dark Magician" + "Black Luster Soldier"Other than that, the OCG is OK.The picture seems really familiar. The effect is descent I guess9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 I think field is capitalized? and Theres not any material monsters now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 No materials, rest of the OCG looks good.Pic looks fitting.It is quite OP, becouse of it's really high ATK stat and his immumity for Traps and Spells. I would lower its ATK to a 3400ish number.A 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon From The Void Posted June 7, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Ok, attack changed and fusion material monsters added. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Darj Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Hmm, considering the Fusion Materials, I would give him a more threatening name. The effect is good, since there are stronger Fusions out there. However, I think you should add a restriction such as "A Fusion Summon of this card can only be conducted with the above Fusion Material Monsters"; that way you wouldn't be able to use substitutes, the fusion will be harder to Summon and it will force you to run the underused "Black Luster Soldier" in your Deck. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lord Smeagle Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 Frex is right. Otherwise, people will abuse the hell out of this in Spellcaster Decks... Owait, Spellcasters could be meta again! Sweet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
έκλειψη Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 I agree with the post agreeing with Frex. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlueEyes22 Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 when this card would be destroyed it is removed from play instead Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jeal1995 Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 that card is cool but.............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Coaster Guy Posted June 7, 2010 Report Share Posted June 7, 2010 FINALLY, someone did this fusion.Unfortunately effect is just alright, and slightly OP'd.Pretty good OCG. I'll start this with a 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Demon From The Void Posted June 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 when this card would be destroyed it is removed from play instead No I actually wanted it to be removed from the field so if your opponent tries to send it back to your hand or deck it's effect is activated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceydude168 Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 A bit UP'd in stats, Black Luster is a real pain to summon, and combined with Dark Magician, it should be a bit higher. The effect can make for it a bit, but the ATK/DEF stats are still too low, making it easy to destroy with just normal attacking. Also, maybe change the effect in the "This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap cards" to "This card is unaffected by Spell and Trap cards your opponent controls". That way, you can equip beneficial stuff, but avoid "Black Hole" and "Lightning Vortex". Or, you could make it simpler and have it only able to destroyed by battle, but then you would have to boost the ATK/DEF. Then again, I'm also a total noob, and I might not know anything I'm talking about :-P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 It's not bad at all. Really nice pic, and decent+balanced effect with a hard-to summon requirement. Overall, I like it.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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