Warriors~|The Eclipse|~Role Play, Other RP's - Warrior Cats - Advanced

[έκλειψη]

No...

I'm not doing this RP. The people that joined aren't Advanced RP'ers, and it would be boring. Sorry, guys, but nevermind this entire thing.

[Christian Exodia]

OOC: You need this to be moved to the RP Planning threads. I'll apply first hand when you do that.

[Sp1at]

Name Tanglefur

 

Age: 26

Clan: Shadowclan

She-cat or Tom: Tom

Rank: Warrior

 

Personality: A very nice cat. Never really mad unless someone is a real jerk.

 

Appearance:

History: Is this a bio? I'm going to say it is.

Tanglefur was born in wild by a rouge. He wasn't a where of it until he was 4 moons old though when he found himself in Shadowclan's camp.

 

Inside Scoop: What's this?

[Moderately_Friendly]

name: Stoneheart, Stonepaw, Stonekit

Clan: ThunderClan

Shecat or tom: Tom

Rank: warrior

Personality: Fun and loving. can be romantic anf flirtatious. Mad when you try to tick him off for no apparent reason. protects his friends.

Appearance: A gray tom with brown spots. he is tall and has good muscles. he is a strong warrior.

Bio: Born in ThunderClan by a rouge who was injured and passing by. His mother died in birth but FireStar managed to save Stonekit. he gave him his name because he was as tough as stone. he soon trained along with the other apprentices. he fell in love with a She-cat named Waterflow. They soon mated and now Water flow is in the nursery expecting his kits.

Inside Scoop: Stoneheart hopes to raise his kits to be loyal like their mother but strong yet kind like their father. His strengths are getting to know cats better and fighting skills. his weaknesses come from his strengths. sometimes he can be TOO kind to cats of other clans. he one day hopes to be deputy.

[Christian Exodia]

tpopoli, could Dragonkit be your son?

Name: Dragonkit, Dragonpaw, Dragonflame

Age: 2 Moons

Clan: Thunderclan

She-cat or Tom: Tom

Rank: Kit

 

Personality: Playful, yet serious at times. He is like a bit of the ringleader of the kittens. He may not be one of the older kits, but he is wise beyond his years, when not playing.

 

Appearance:

 

History: Dragonkit doesn't have much of a history. He was born to Stoneheart & Waterflow, plus is like a mini Stoneheart. Right now he is currently ringleader of the kits in the Nursery, somehow being he's the youngest. His ambition and sense of adventure gets the kits into constant mishaps & trouble, but in the end, he always pulls through.

 

Inside Scoop: Dragonkit was told by his father the dream Stoneheart has. He, when not leading kits, sleeping, or eating, is watching cats fight, be it play or real. He is trying to learn from his peers. This is a big deal, even though he's a good way from being able to really do this. He wants to be better, learning from their mistakes, & even once snuck in to watch the battle, stupid idea, because an enemy caught sight of him. But he is learning, & life is a highway, with many roads for him to take.

[Moderately_Friendly]

sure I guess yes actually that would be great!!!! YAY!!!! Stoneheart and waterflow has a son thats not an NPC!!! Your brother is Bearkit and your sister is Cloverkit.

[έκλειψη]

Thanks for putting in applications, but please keep in mind that this is an ADVANCED RP. I don't mean to be rude, but I would like to see a sample of your Role Playing before accepting you. The last site I was on wasn't great for the quality of the Role Play due to me not screening this way.

[Moderately_Friendly]

okay for me look at RotEI, RotAM, RotME and Warriors: the forgotten clans. Those four were mostly advanced and I followed the rules. i post at least 4 lines as what the advanced clause says.

[έκλειψη]

You might post the right quantity, but what about quality? The Advanced clause here on YCM is equivalent to illiterate/semi-literate on most other websites.

[Moderately_Friendly]

(( added stoneheart's inside scoop))

I usually post along with the stories. i admit sometimes I go off and make my own storyline but other than that i try to post good quality paragraphs.

[έκλειψη]

*Sigh

 

Okay, then. Let's see if we can get some other members to join.

[Sp1at]

Wanna see a sample of my Role Playing. Then I'll post one from a RP I'm in maybe later.

[Moderately_Friendly]

OH!!!! I gotcha now....... be right back. (goes to the old RotAM thread.)

 

Okay here is my sample from return of the arcadia Movement. This is when My character DJ was retoring his memories at a hospital after dueling under the control of the movement. this is three posts in one becuase the posts were short back then because the advanced clause wasnt up and running. So i combined them for you.

 

The doctor walked in.

"Thank you Miss Fudo for Visiting but Mr. kaiba needs some rest." the doctor said escorting the crying Yuki out of the hospital.

~Meanwhile~

"We need to restore his memory before they come looking for us. Computer restore his memory." The scientist said processing the data and pressing a button.

Restoration at 10%

DJ's memories Its your fault Damian is.............I thought you were my....... that guy just cra.......

 

Restoration at 59%

DJ's memories Basic training at Kai....I summon Sky...bo..nd...imor......l Uc.....All... what better card to use then shining rain..... dra...

 

Restoration at 89%

"You do know there is a plan B." the scientist said smiling

"You dont mean the "C" project do you?" the leader asked.

“But "C" project is a backup. DJ could still be use to us." the leader said

"Not in his state. His cousin and friends will protect him now that they know who we are after." the scientist retorted.

[έκλειψη]

I'd kinda like to see your Skybound Immortal and Shining rainbow Dragon cards. : P

 

That is of a fairly large quantity, but the quality is pretty average. Whatever, though, accepted.

[Moderately_Friendly]

My skybound I deleted (srry) I can give you its lore and ATK/DEF if yuou want ill PM it to you. And the shining rainbow dragon is the same as the regular but with boosted attack. There are the adavnced and normal crystal beasts as you know. but I made another variation called the shinging crystal beasts based on your opponent showing you their face down monster and their hand.

[Christian Exodia]

Mine(Made up at the spot):

Alex huffed & puffed. The opponent he looked right at was tough, "Maybe even too tough." He thought. He kept the little girl & kitten behind him safely. The man threw up a 3-D Octagonal shaped item, & it opened instantly. I then threw up a 3-D Hexagonal figure, & when they opened, they turned into weapons: His of the Earth, mine of the Air. A weird voice spoke: Rock Hammer. Battle Turbine. Go." And their weapons popped out. His a mace & some weird claw, mine was two dragon faces & a Turbine. This match was going to be brutal.

[Moderately_Friendly]

Damn that one kicks mine's @$$!

[έκλειψη]

Sure. I was hoping for advanced to mean more around the likes of some other sites I've been on. Here's a sample of mine; I don't want to ask for samples without showing something myself. This is from another site I RP on...

 

A melodious howl erupted from the tunnels of the Desfir lands, a thousand different tones with a thousand different owners all releasing their own calls into the sky. The loudest of these was from the only living wolf to howl, Amaterasu. She had claimed this land, and howled to declare it; all of the fallen wolves to whom the land was claimed before stating their approval in a gust of wind. Amaterasu stepped down, slowly making her decent from the mouth of the highest cave to the lowest, where territories met, and the risk of invasion was high.

 

Yes, Amaterasu had, for the longest time, been concerned there would be an invasion into Desfir territory, as she was not one for violence, and though she could assert herself and develop a strategy to take down most any foe, she wasn't a very violent she-wolf. She had a slim frame, and in a battle for dominance, was certainly the least powerful of the Alphas in Sorrelli. Thoughts about an overthrow kept her awake some nights, which was why she had to keep such tight restrictions on borders. She was no coward, but an unnecessary battle is one to avoid.

 

The she-wolf looked across borders, orange eyes scanning her surroundings as if her optical lobes were supercomputers, ready to process however much data was input. No one. That was good as far as safety was concerned, yet still somewhat depressing. It was Mating season, and she had yet to find a male. She would be first to have pups; as well as being last. There would be no tolerance for other pups being born; not this year, when her dominance was still so recent. She had to securely grip Desfir physically and mentally. She knew the territory inside out, she had explored every tunnel, knowing when to turn back and when another exit was down the path, and she had known every good area to hunt, as well as how often to hunt there. All she didn't know was how to guarantee that all of her servants would obey her. Democracy was not in effect here; she wasn't supposed to care what anyone beneath her thought, though she still did. This was a benevolent dictatorship, and Amaterasu was the supreme ruler of all things in her land.

 

Now all she needed to was deliver that message to those in Desfir, as well as believe it herself.

 

The she-wolf walked further down, the snow turning into ice where it had constantly became water before freezing again. She stopped here; it was just ice. Taking a deep breath, she took a step on the clear substance, hearing a sickening crack as she speedily darted across it, stopping as she returned to stone and the mouth of a nearby cave. With a sigh of relief, she let out another howl, warning those nearby that if a wolf wasn't coming to join Desfir, they shouldn't cross the border. Trespassing was a crime, and its only punishment was death.

 

As the snow fell on the ground, something it did most all the time, Amaterasu began to become invisible. He snow-white fur matched the snow perfectly, and only her birthmark stood out in the veil of ever-falling precipitation.

[Christian Exodia]

What do you think of mine, Ekaeiwn?

[Moderately_Friendly]

I think 'sure' stands for accepted but thats just me with my italian accent.

[έκλειψη]

Yes, 'sure' is Έκλειψηian for 'Accepted'.

[Moderately_Friendly]

can we start or do we have to wait?

[Mrs. SHINee <3]

Tpopli, can PedalKit be your daughter (HOPE YOU SAY YES :D )

 

Name PedalKit, PedalClaw, PedalScratch

 

Age: 2 Moons

Clan: Thunder Clan

She-cat or Tom: She-Cat

Rank: Kit

 

Personality: PedalKit is very playful and loves to play around. She's very sarcastic and jokes around alot. She hates getting to the point of things or getting into the details of certain situations. PedalKit will do anything to help out her brother's and sister no matter what the cost is,

 

Appearance: [spoiler=pic]

 

 

 

History: PedalKit has no real history. She was born to StoneHeart and WaterFlowe .She is DragonKit's helper in mischief and other bad deeds. She is usually the one who has to cover for everyone in the end, But only if DragonKit doesn't pull through with his entire plan.

 

Inside Scoop: Likes: Morning Dew, Flowers, Thunder

 

Dislikes: Lightning, Fire, Monster's (Cars)

 

Fears: Death, Losing Her Family, Going Crazy

 

Strengths: Great Lier, Easily Trustworthy, Very Caring

 

Weakness's: Easily Distracted, Easily Pressured Into Things, Not Very Strong

[Moderately_Friendly]

I guess i can switch it from cloverkit. Any ways i like how this is going to turn out. all we need is to start the DAMN RP!!!!!

[Sp1at]

you wanted a RP example well here it is.

 

[spoiler=Example]

Tanglestar woke up in his wonderful nest to find Sweetdream the medicine cat of the clan sleeping in the medicine cat den. Tanglestar walked outside of his nice and comfortable den to find they were really low on Warriors. They only had 3 Warriors. The gathering was also tonight so he could probably work something out with Nightstar. I think it's time we bring those kits in the nursery out and get them to begin they're training. Because most likely Nightstar might be planning an attack.