kidwarrior77 Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 If there is a light monster on the field, this monster gains the combined atk points of all faced up non-light monsters Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 To be honest, 2/10. It has an OPed effect, and you mispelled fairy, and horrible ocg and grammar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ParaToxic Posted June 8, 2010 Report Share Posted June 8, 2010 Correct OCG:If there is a LIGHT monster on the field, this card gains the combined ATK of all non-LIGHT Attribute monsters. The card is way 2 OP. 1/10 - Sorry! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Cakey Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Correct OCG:If there is a LIGHT monster on the field' date=' this card gains the combined ATK of all non-LIGHT Attribute monsters. The card is way 2 OP. 1/10 - Sorry![/quote'] People incorrectly correcting OCG are my pet peeve. Normally I'd just leave with my signature letter, but I will correct the OCG correction first. "While there is a LIGHT monster on the field, this card's ATK becomes equal to the total ATK of all non-LIGHT monsters on the field." And ???? ATK = ? ATK Now...[spoiler=Dear YCM]Dear YCM, Please stop making s*** cards. Sincerely,Dr. Cakey Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wolfman505 Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Correct OCG:If there is a LIGHT monster on the field' date=' this card gains the combined ATK of all non-LIGHT Attribute monsters. The card is way 2 OP. 1/10 - Sorry![/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
touzaikokon Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Not to beat a dead horse, but if I rated this, I would probably give this a 1 or 2 out of 10. Now, instead of doing that, I'm going to address what you should focus on fixing: First off, let's give your effect proper OCG: "While there is a LIGHT monster on the field' date=' this card's ATK becomes equal to the total ATK of all non-LIGHT monsters on the field."[/quote'] Righty-o. Now, this effect is overpowered. One, the card itself is a LIGHT monster, so it activates it's own effect. That, in and of itself, is not so bad. It's that it's whoring ATK is the problem. You should try to create balanced effects that don't break the game. The other thing you need to focus on is your grammar in general. You misspelled "Fairy." That's not good. Also, don't use "????" for ATK. Just one "?" will suffice. I think that's all the help you need. There's an OCG/Grammar thread you can search for, that will help you out. Good luck! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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