Sandviches Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Here is my first card: It is not as good as a lot of the others I have seen... but I tried. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Looks goodI think you should change the life points part to:"When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can send 1 Spell or Trap card you control to the Graveyard to inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent. The one's that are in bold are the errors that are fixedthe underlined are the one I think is supposed to be.9/10 good start for a newcomer. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sandviches Posted June 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 Alright, I fixed it.Thank you for your help. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted June 9, 2010 Report Share Posted June 9, 2010 no problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Verebazs2 Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 OCG fix"Each turn, this card remains face-up on the field, place 1 Portal Counter on it (max 3). You can remove 3 Portal Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Level3 or lower EARTH monster."DHDogma already fixed the second half, and I think it's OK.8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 "Each turn' date=' this card remains face-up on the field, place 1 Portal Counter on it (max 3). You can remove 3 Portal Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Level3 or lower EARTH monster."[/quote'] "When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard' date=' you can send 1 Spell or Trap [b']C[/b]ard you control to the Graveyard to inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent's Life Points. As you can see the 1st correction was ok...the 2nd correction had some errors..so I correct them. :) Very good job!! for a 1st card specialy!! 9.6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 How did I forget that Capitalized "C"? Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Tin Trooper Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 As long as this card remains on your field, place 1 Portal Counter on it during each of your Standby Phases (max. 3). You can remove 3 Portal Counters from this card to Special Summon 1 Level 3 or lower EARTH Monster from your hand or Deck. When this card is destroyed and sent to the Graveyard, you can send 1 Spell or Trap Card on your field to the Graveyard to inflict 400 points of damage to your opponent. ^^The Expert OCG Edition.^^ Always nice to see another Portal fan.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted June 10, 2010 Report Share Posted June 10, 2010 Never found that Chicken's test results though. Lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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