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Exodia's Apprentice


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very good card, D-4 is a noob dont listne to him, you should have the effect draw 3 card if there are any cards that contain "Exodia" add them to your hand otherwise remove them from play but its a nice card, just because its called something doesnt mean it has to have anything to do with it you noob...

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"When this card is Summoned' date=' remove from play the top 3 cards of your Deck. This card's ATK and DEF becomes the [b']total[/b] ATK and DEF of all monsters removed by this effect."

Just correcting the corrections.

 

And jeez, D-4 was right, it doesn't have anything to do with Exodia, so it shouldn't be called Exodia's Apprentice. Okay?

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Card Lore:

 

When this card is Normal Summoned, Flip Summoned, or Special Summoned, take the top 3 cards from your deck and remove them from play. The total ATK and DEF of any monsters drawn is the ATK and DEF of this card. If the card has "Exodia" in its name, or is named "Right Arm of the Forbidden One," "Left Arm of the Forbidden One," "Right Leg of the Forbidden One," or "Left Leg of the Forbidden One," the card is added to your hand, and an extra card is drawn. If no monsters were drawn, the ATK and DEF of this card becomes 0.

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That's better. It helps you get pieces as well as getting rid of extra cards. Nice work' date=' I like it.

8.5/10

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Yeah, if u had 2 Exodia pieces in your hand, and u just drew the last 3 u would remove them from play instead of win the duel. I see that now.

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Either "look at" or "reveal" cards from the Deck (revealed shows to both players). Additionally, you can just call them "Forbidden One" monsters. Say "draw 1 more card" or even just "draw 1 card" instead of "an extra card is drawn". Also, you don't need to note that if no monsters are drawn its ATK is 0, that's really a given.

 

And ???? should still be just ?.

 

This is still a nice card, as I said before. OCG criticism is the hallmark of Realistic Cards.

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The pic is epic, but the effect, as other's have said, isn't all that great. I would recomend something involving the five pieces of Exodia, like:

"When this card is Summoned, draw 3 cards. This card gains 1000 ATK and DEF for each "Forbidden One" card in your hand."

Just an idea, but I'm sure there are better ones. Also, I wouldn't make him a level 1 monster.

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