Spartan Army

[darkphang]

THIS IS SPARTA!

[NeosWiseman]

First impression - really overpowered... :?

I like the description, though

But you know, there is almost nothing to comment here

 

Note: The picture shows many Persian and just one Spartan Soldier.... X_X

[Tsuksimatsawl]

yup... to overpowered. I have to agrre with the above.

 

concerning asthetics i give a 10/10

fairness of card is a 0/10

[darkphang]

Alright thanks I'll fix the OP'ed

 

EDIT: look now

[FriendlyHost]

THIS IS SPARTA!!! ESPECIALLY OVERPOWERED

[Giga Hand]

THIS IS OVERPOWERED!!!

 

THIS NEEDS WORK!!!

 

THIS IS getting rather annoying.

[~Umbreon~]

Very OPed

[NeosWiseman]

Still there. You should like cut the ATK/DEF almost in half to balance it out. And why not give it an effect. If you do, make sure to balance it out as well ;-)

[Βyakuya]

THIS.......IS.......SPARTA!!!!!Overpowered. And an effect card would be better. 5/10

[kuriboh fan]

the max is 5000. plus i think i heard a rule about vanillas, i think it was "nothing stronger than 3000 for vanillas, i think that's the rule. good pic.4/10

[darkphang]

look now. grammar might not be perfect but if some one could please rephrase this...

[Shizuku Oikawa]

+500/+1000?

never seen anyone attempt this error before but, what do they increase?

[Coaster Guy]

the max is 5000. plus i think i heard a rule about vanillas' date=' i think it was "nothing stronger than 3000 for vanillas, i think that's the rule. good pic.4/10

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This isn't a vanilla.

[Shizuku Oikawa]

It was a Vanilla when it was 1st posted.

now he changed it to an effect monster

[Coaster Guy]

It was a Vanilla when it was 1st posted.

now he changed it to an effect monster

 

oh.

 

This card does not belong in the pop culture section.

[Βyakuya]

Now that it changed, its not even better. Its still a littel overpwoered for the picture and its effect is not accurate.

 

4/10

[kuriboh fan]

here i think i can re-phrase it for you. ahe-he-he-hem

Discard 1 monster from your hand to Tribute Summon this card. Any Warrior-Type monsters on the field are destroyed. For every monster destroyed this way this cards ATK increases by 500, and DEF increases by 1000.

I am more-likely to be wrong (so correct me) but that way the card could be perfect. so-far 6/10.

[Shizuku Oikawa]

it's not being specific of what the tributed card is for, so your correction may be wrong.

[kuriboh fan]

oh well i guess i was kinda close. plus i didn't know if it was like montage dragon or tribute from hand, so yeah.

[Shizuku Oikawa]

I would've gotten the whole correction thing down if had made his effect any clearer...

[kuriboh fan]

yeah you could've. if only. So is it like montage dragon or tribute from hand we kinda need to know so we can help.

[Shizuku Oikawa]

we just have to wait for this guy to come back then.

[kuriboh fan]

oh well. see this post tomorrow!

[darkphang]

Thanks, thats pretty much right on. As for the +500/+1000 its ffrom a game i play called magic the gathering.

BTW a tribute from hand

[LiAM]

If Op'd was your aim, I suggest A/o/C section.

 

Otherwise, consider practising a card's fairness within a game of Yu-Gi-Oh.

 

The idea behind it is pretty simple, and the wording of the card lacks correctness, however I'm not sure if the rules have been changed for P/C or not yet.

 

But graveyard=Graveyard and remember to use the terms ATK + DEF etc.