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I saw. xD

[Legend Zero]

Soul Vs. jumpking?

 

I'm already laughing.

[Zorbak55]

Lol. This isnt even close to my best work. C the sonic tag in my sig? Well, I created that for the contest.

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Soul Vs. jumpking?

 

I'm already laughing.

 

I LOVE YOU! xD

[Tormented]

Okay guys leave the Nubcake Alone maybe just a slap on the wrist will do him good oh wait he has had more than that

 

agen I will post the Definition of Criticism and show you in it there is something to do about artwork

 

1. The act of criticizing, especially adversely.

2. A critical comment or judgment.

3.

a. The practice of analyzing, classifying, interpreting, or evaluating literary or other artistic works.

b. A critical article or essay; a critique.

c. The investigation of the origin and history of literary documents; textual criticism.

 

go read some tuts.... -__-

[Zorbak55]

Exactly what I said. Ur not supposed to critisize, ur supposed to rate, and give any information (if possible) to help make it better.

[-DG-]

Exactly what I said. Ur not supposed to critisize' date=' ur supposed to rate, and give any information (if possible) to help make it better.

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Look up the Definition of CnC, please.

 

And, you don't rate in Showcase. EVER.

 

 

You do criticize. Criticism is crucial to getting better. Go look at some of my previous tags and you'll see what I mean.

[Smear]

Exactly what I said. Ur not supposed to critisize' date=' ur supposed to rate, and give any information (if possible) to help make it better.

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COMMENTS AND CRITICISM.

[mythcaptor]

also, Im not sure who did the rendering, but it sucks. The edges are grainy and off. The background is a decent base to work off of, but it isnt done. It needs lighting effects, blending effects, etc. The images are inconsistent with colors, and not well place in the image. Using two of the same image in one tag is a NO. Lastly, the text is all monocolor and in a cliche font, which bring the whole image down more than you can imagine.

 

I see a little bit of potential, but you have a long way to go.

keep working at it

 

edit: also, the sonic and iron man tags have the same problems, except maybe the rendering, which is all right, so stop saying that this "isnt my best work, Im so much better" :P

 

edit#2: as I read more and more of this thread, I keep haveing new things to say. "This is better than anything you will ever make"-- rofl? Are you aware of the fact that you are talking to REAL gfx'ers? A little self confidence is good, but you really think that you are a hell of a lot better than you actually are. If you want some advise, pm me. I can give you a few tricks. Look at my sig. I made that without any stock images. Just puting a few badly rendered images onto a cliche background isnt gfx'ing

[Tormented]

Epic post btw and this needs to be locked

[Zorbak55]

also' date=' Im not sure who did the rendering, but it sucks. The edges are grainy and off. The background is a decent base to work off of, but it isnt done. It needs lighting effects, blending effects, etc. The images are inconsistent with colors, and not well place in the image. Using two of the same image in one tag is a NO. Lastly, the text is all monocolor and in a cliche font, which bring the whole image down more than you can imagine.

 

I see a little bit of potential, but you have a long way to go.

keep working at it

 

edit: also, the sonic and iron man tags have the same problems, except maybe the rendering, which is all right, so stop saying that this "isnt my best work, Im so much better" :P

 

edit#2: as I read more and more of this thread, I keep haveing new things to say. "This is better than anything you will ever make"-- rofl? Are you aware of the fact that you are talking to [b']REAL[/b] gfx'ers? A little self confidence is good, but you really think that you are a hell of a lot better than you actually are. If you want some advise, pm me. I can give you a few tricks. Look at my sig. I made that without any stock images. Just puting a few badly rendered images onto a cliche background isnt gfx'ing

 

Thanks for the advice. And I didnt say I'm so much better. I said I can do better.

[Cin]

This has gone on too long really. Rating is a massive NO NO in this section as it provides anything useful.

 

Jumpking, they've tried to direct you to things that are wrong, but all you've done is ignore the advice and claim they just seem to criticize rather than help you, however they all started trying to help, and you worked it into criticism, by refusing to acknowledge any of what they said. Your only comebacks seems to be to claim you're better than them or you can do better, you work misses alot of the basics of gfx, such as flow, lighting and depth.

 

When they said bad text, they mean bad use of text, not many people can do text to be frank, its all about how you use it, the blending/incorporation of the text, and its layout. The text looks like it was made in a completely different program and pasted on, since the edges look very rough.

 

Learn to focus on how to use one render properly before you begin to use more than 1 even if this is a banner, your tags however need to have one focal not three (I include the text because in your tags it has became another focal). Everything seems really overstretched, only use renders that fit to the size of the piece you're making, otherwise they WILL blur. The cut of your renders suffers alot because of overresizing (resizing far above what they render really should be) and frankly the edges make me feel queezy (given my 3 years + experience with rendering)

 

The background is very basic, and doesn't even relate to the focals, I'd expect a dark, dungeon like background giving the renders and title of the banner.

 

To prevent more of this argument and potential flaming. LOCKED.