My First Two Cards

[CompSciDuelist]

These are the first two cards that I've created. They're only 1 Spell and 1 Trap.

 

 

Please leave any constructive criticism.

[Hungry Panda]

well for starters, i think firewall should be a spell card. your OCG is good for a new member. they're pretty balanced. so i shall give you a 8.5/10

[Vediavis]

actually firewall doesnt need to be a spell, tornado wall is set up the same way.

all in all pretty well done for a beginer

9.9/10

[Guest Shadowfang1992]

Hmm, really good, but I agree with monsterman that Firewall should be a spell card. Other than that, well made for your first two!

[CompSciDuelist]

Sorry made a tiny, tiny, TINY mistake on one of the cards

[Surging Dragon - Iniquity]

I see much potential for these cards... 9.5/10 ^_^ I look forward to seeing more.

[CompSciDuelist]

I see much potential for these cards... 9.5/10 ^_^ I look forward to seeing more.

 

Thanks for the comment! I'm new to this, so . . . yeah. Sadly, creating monsters are a bit difficult for me, so most of the cards I'll make usually tend to be Spell or Trap.

[DarkTech]

Not bad... you should check out my first card :P Ill give you a 7.5/10

[Surging Dragon - Iniquity]

I see much potential for these cards... 9.5/10 ^_^ I look forward to seeing more.

 

Thanks for the comment! I'm new to this' date=' so . . . yeah. Sadly, creating monsters are a bit difficult for me, so most of the cards I'll make usually tend to be Spell or Trap.

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Don't worry about it, you'll get better with time. I still have problems with OCG and finding good pictures all the time. ^_^

[~Duo~]

Wow! Really good for a new member! It's not the greatest I've seen by a new member, but still, what Surging Dragon - Iniquity said, they have potential. I think an OCG error is that for Firewall, you don't need to add "to keep this card in play". I think it's just:

 

"During your Standby Phase, pay 1000 life points. If you do not, destroy this card."

 

8.5/10