~Black~ Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard.Release this face-up card to Special Summon 1 Monster Card from your Graveyard and take damage equal to the ATK of the Special Summoned monster.This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caner5000 Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Uhh Overall a 7/10, Few comments: Space your periods and the next sentence. The OCG i have alot of questions about it. Like why do i need to discard one card from my hand? What do you mean by "realease this face-up card"?Also you can take out the "Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a spell, Trap, or Effect Monster." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Lol i agree with changing that first sentence because you will be discarding for nothing. "Release this face-up card" refers to tributing/sacrifing a card, its a new term. Last part I agree is a little unnecessary but it is up to you since it is your card. Woops forgot the rating, 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Duo~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Once per turn you can discard 1 card from your Hand to the Graveyard.Release this face-up card to Special Summon 1 Monster Card from your Graveyard and take damage equal to the ATK of the Special Summoned monster.This card cannot be destroyed as a result of battle.Destroy this card when it is targeted by the effect of a Spell, Trap, or Effect Monster. Once per turn, you can discard 1 card from your hand to your Graveyard. You can tribute this face-up card to Special Summon 1 monster from your Graveyard. You must pay Life Points equal to the ATK of the Special Summoned monster. This card cannot be destroyed in battle. Destroy this card when it is targeted by a card effect. That's my OCG fix. A bit creative. 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leo5780 Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 I dont like the effect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Black~ Posted June 22, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2010 I dont like the effect and the effect dosent like you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 to every1 except zetaru there isno need to space periods no one cares.discarding a card for nothing enh......useful in fabled deck i think so.....useful in dw deck i think so.....ifreakin love it except it should be a lvl 4 with 1 less effect and a better pic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Black~ Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 =) thank ya Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caner5000 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 to every1 except zetaru there isno need to space periods no one cares.discarding a card for nothing enh......useful in fabled deck i think so.....useful in dw deck i think so.....ifreakin love it except it should be a lvl 4 with 1 less effect and a better picSpacing periods show good grammar skills, and that you actually take time in making cards. I think alot of people card about period spacing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Black~ Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 to every1 except zetaru there isno need to space periods no one cares.discarding a card for nothing enh......useful in fabled deck i think so.....useful in dw deck i think so.....ifreakin love it except it should be a lvl 4 with 1 less effect and a better picSpacing periods show good grammar skills' date=' and that you actually take time in making cards. I think alot of people card<------card? you mean care mr grammar english is not an important subject..i speak it..dosent matter if i do poorly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
caner5000 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 to every1 except zetaru there isno need to space periods no one cares.discarding a card for nothing enh......useful in fabled deck i think so.....useful in dw deck i think so.....ifreakin love it except it should be a lvl 4 with 1 less effect and a better picSpacing periods show good grammar skills' date=' and that you actually take time in making cards. I think alot of people card<------card? you mean care mr grammar english is not an important subject..i speak it..dosent matter if i do poorlyLittle things make a difference. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
B3lly N3rd Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 ugh grammar why would people even rate on that i would rate onspelling the most grammar makes no sence to me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Black~ Posted June 24, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 to every1 except zetaru there isno need to space periods no one cares.discarding a card for nothing enh......useful in fabled deck i think so.....useful in dw deck i think so.....ifreakin love it except it should be a lvl 4 with 1 less effect and a better picSpacing periods show good grammar skills' date=' and that you actually take time in making cards. I think alot of people card<------card? you mean care mr grammar english is not an important subject..i speak it..dosent matter if i do poorlyLittle things make a difference. not to me =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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