John A. Zoidberg Posted June 20, 2010 Report Share Posted June 20, 2010 This is a preview of my first set, called Agony Warriors. For now, I only have 7 cards finished. I aim to have the full set done in a week or two, when I will put it in finished sets. Credit for the pics go to whatever websites I found with google images. Enjoy! Please, feel free to pint out OCG errors, overused pics, or any other mistakes. Remember, I'm still learning :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rottenricky Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 h-holy crap these cards are AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 For the last card "Blade of Agony" wouldn't you get 0 Life Points because the monster's ATK was reduced to 0. For "Agony Mage" instead of "and 2000 or less ATK" it should be "with an ATK of 2000 or less." The effect on "Black Bloodspill" is questionable and seems too UP in a way. The rest of the set looks good to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Shadowfang1992 Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Hey, you're really good at this! Keep it up, these are really cool! Except that on "Black Bloodspill" you spelled the word card like "ccard." You spelled directed "dierected" on "Agony Martyr". Easy fixes, just wanted you to know ^^ Other than that, 10/10 with the exception of the mentioned misspellings! Keep up the good work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Black~ Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 "Special Summon"and for that agony marytar thing i think you mean"Your opponent cannot select another face-up monster as an attack target."and blood spill isn't worth it we don't need another exodia"Spell or Trap Card" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Thanks everyone! I'll be sure to make these changes. I'll post a link on this thread once I get some more done.And, not to double post, but would it be better if I changed Agony Nightmare's effect to "After this card is summoned, Light monsters cannot be summoned." Would that be cool, or too overpowered?I hope I'm not getting out of hang with these posts :3My purpose for Black Bloodspill's conditions are to ensure that you have no spell or trap cards that would negate the effect of something to destroy Black Bloodspill. I wanted to make it insanely difficult to summon Agony Nightmare. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 The "After this card is summoned, Light monsters cannot be summone" sounds a little OP, especially for those Lightsworn users. Make them lose ATK or DEF or whatever. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 I changed his effect to "As long as this card remains on the field, light monsters' ATK are halved." Is that good? What would you recommend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 That sounds like a reasonable effect to me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted June 21, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 Cool, thanks for the help :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hyaku_hachi Posted June 21, 2010 Report Share Posted June 21, 2010 No problem. Happy to help! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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