byak Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 [align=center][spoiler=v2] [spoiler=v1][/align] Go go go. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Hmm, I like it, but the border isnt really doing it for me:/You've got pretty good flow and Depth with this one.But theres just something about the overall sig that bothers me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 ^Like the fact that looking at the bg hurts my eyes. X_X The bg is...it just bothers me. A lot. It's somewhat of a mess. Could use a bit more lighting, too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 That could be it. But he achieved some pretty good Depth and flow with it. I thinK? lol. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 That's just it. I can't really tell what I'm looking at in the bg, so there really is not depth to it. It flows a bit, but...that bg. It's what's causing all the problems. Though the only thing not caused by the bg is the lack of lighting. =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Ahh, Then i guess i dont know the Definition of Depth:/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legend Zero Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 BG is too blurred to determine what it is. imo, the size you're using is too big for your skill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
byak Posted June 23, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Tweaked it a bit.Added a bit more lighting. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brendano Harns Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Everything towards the left is good now, but the left side is still flat and overblurred. =\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 It's actually pretty nice with the new version. But it's just the right side looks a little blurry and falsely lit. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
/성成현賢/.led Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 First, the border really needs to go. Some styles or themes may need a border suck as a straight up portrait manipulation, but not here. You killed your background with blur. The size you chose is rather big and you didn't incorporate all the space well. Basics are getting better, however, you need to learn how to use L-I-G-H-T-I-N-G (I love doing that ^_^) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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