thesasukecursemark Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 lets get it started Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Musical K-ON! Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 Bad PictureImproper GrammarNo Capital Letters 4/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mothball Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 First Capatilize your words. This isn't Twitter or Facebook.Next, OCG (Official Card Grammer) fix. Not the worst I've seen, still pretty bad though.OCG Fix - For each monster in your Graveyard with "Goku" in it's name, this card gains 100 ATK.Effect meh, bland and generic and need a better pic.I suggest searching Deviant Art (deviantart.com) for a pics when you need them. 4/10 Sorry. Not trying to be mean. Just not, that good of a card. But you're new. You'll get the hang of it eventually. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrogMan Posted June 23, 2010 Report Share Posted June 23, 2010 I would comment very badly at this. But since im part of a new program. I will be nice/ish. THIS CARD SUCKS! You have been corrected :). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
biraj123 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Bad Picture, Ok efect despite the bad OCG. How about... Increase this card's ATK by 100 for every 'Goku' in the graveyard. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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