starwebs1 Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 I'm back! And I've made a set of SUPER MARIO BROS. CARDS! I know some of the images are horrible, but I just couldn't find any good ones. [spoiler=THE CARDS!] Please don't comment on the backgrounds, but any other tips are fine! EDIT 6.25.10 10:40 AM EST: Fire Luigi has been fixed, he didn't have the fused cards listed on him. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted June 24, 2010 Report Share Posted June 24, 2010 Meh. I think you should remove the 'Super Mario Bros." card and change Boo to a Fiend. 7/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starwebs1 Posted June 25, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 BUMP! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 -The images could be better ("Boo" is pixellated and "Fire Flower", "Koopa" and "Super Mario Bros." need backgrounds to them)-There are Types that are more appropriate:[spoiler= Type examples]Boo = Fiend or Zombie-Type, considering it being undead Bowser = Reptile-Type, because Koopas overall are reptiles, and Bowser has no Dinosaur classificationsFire Flower = Plant-Type, because it's an actual flowerGoomba = Plant-Type, because Goombas are rotten mushrooms -The effects could be a lot more creative, instead of only focusing on changing ATK is a certain card is on the field. Basically, they all have the same effect, without any unique effect that suits their qualities. -Several OCG errors- "Bowser" is overpowered for a Level 7. Either decrease its ATK by 500, or give it an effect which has more cost to it. Overall, it could do with some fixing, but it's far from terrible. Just read the feedback that you've been given, and make those adjustments. Keep it up. 5/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ExecutiveProducer Posted June 25, 2010 Report Share Posted June 25, 2010 boo? 3400 DEF? holy crap... either make its atk 0 and def 2400 or balance it out... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uchiha Sasuke XII Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 Well, they seem OK, with the exception of the pics. But some of the cards are OPed. Take Bowsr as an example. And OCG needs work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
starwebs1 Posted June 26, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 Thanks! I'll keep those tips in mind for my next set. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
5252345262667 Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 meh. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Even for a Level 2, I think your Goomba is way underpowered, and your Boo is TOO overpowered, almost bordering on rediculous. Sorry. But the rest are okay. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Why is a level four much more powerful then a level five?(Boo and Toadstool.)Kinda unbalanced Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astro Dude Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 I think Fire Flower should be a Speel card or a Trap Card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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