luanluker Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 The dragons reign didn't come out right, but here is the other! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Ultimate Future Weapon~ Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 Pic is blurry Oped shouldnt have 0 DEFother than that 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Βyakuya Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 The pic is overused, while it is blurry. You have moderate OCG errors, but grammar is important. Also the ATK and DEF are a little OPed so 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 You should try to add another unblurry picture, lower the attack point and increase the defense points. OCG needs a bit more work but I'll give it a 6.75/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted June 26, 2010 Report Share Posted June 26, 2010 I agree with what everyone else has just said in terms of the average OCG, the defence of the card and the blurry picture, but the issue I have with the card is its name. This card reveals both players hands so surely that leaves you thinking that you have to come up with a name that holds connotations to revelation. E.G: Black dragon of truthOmniscient Black dragon etc. Your name says to me that you either panicked or were lazy when you came up with this card's name. Names and first impressions are important. remember that. overall 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cowboy Dan Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by the effect of "The Dragon's Reign". This card can attack twice in the same Battle Phase. If it does, it cannot attack the following turn. Both players must have their hands revealed at all times. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
luanluker Posted June 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Bumpityump! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dark Armor Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 http://images.yugiohcardmaker.net/571954/490283792.jpg hay we god the same pic!got* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Astarael Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 The pic is overused' date=' while it is blurry. You have moderate OCG errors, but grammar is important. Also the ATK and DEF are a little OPed so 5/10[/quote'] this more or less Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
A.Prime Posted June 29, 2010 Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 The pic is overused' date=' while it is blurry. You have moderate OCG errors, but grammar is important. Also the ATK and DEF are a little OPed so 5/10[/quote'] Yeap...he is right!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest ash_202457 Posted June 29, 2010 Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 Oped and Blurry pic, lil ocg errors 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
VampYoshi101 Posted June 29, 2010 Report Share Posted June 29, 2010 Blurry pic, OCG errors, 5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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