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Just wondering. Was your cousin in a car and the drunk driver hit the car, or did the drunk driver hit your cousin straight on?

 

Cause my foot got hit by a car once. And it hurt. A lot.

 

Straight on.

 

But he's stable, so that's f***ing awesome.

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I read the first chapter. Interesting story you've got going here. Oh and from my first look at chapter two, you have some editing to do. In Chapter one nothing was wrong but in Chapter 2 you left the forum codes in for a spoiler and italicizing and bolds.

 

As for a potential name I'd have to give it a little thought.

 

I think Yankee hates me, guys.

Or perhaps he's so anxious about his fanfic that he's ignoring whatever anyone says about it only causing himself to panic further about not getting responses? No that couldn't be it.

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No, I saw the name. I just want more name opinions before I make a choice. Going with the first given doesn't make a ton of sense, does it?

 

EDIT: Turns out I can't do anything to change chapter two. I can even delete it, and repost it, but it doesn't do anything.

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EDIT: Turns out I can't do anything to change chapter two. I can even delete it, and repost it, but it doesn't do anything.

That sucks. Oh well, not really important. It doesn't make reading the chapter difficult it's just odd to see. By the way, good work on Chapter 2 now that I've read it.

 

I have a potential name for you. Take it, leave it, bend it some way to your liking, whatever you choose to do with it won't hurt my feelings.

Pokemon: Conscripted into Shadows.

 

I'd probably go with "bend it some way to your liking" if I were you as it sounds a little odd to me now that I look at it.

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Virginia. My mom came home at 10:00 PM, Saturday, and decided we were going with her to VA. It would be 'safer' for her sleeping kids to keep her awake as she drove...

 

She's REALLY pissing me off.

List:

Monday: supposed to go get PokeRanger. Flaked at last minute for overtime.

Wednesday: supposed to get PokeRanger and FF Warriors of ight. Flaked at last minute for being tired. Said we'd get them Friday.

Friday: supposed to go get the games. Flaked at last moment, and said I could only get one, because I 'commanded' (AKA I ASKED) her to get me the games. Just got Ranger. (NOTE: She claims that I get everything I ask for. Last time I got a game was March, except for cheapo games for the family)

Saturday: supposed to let me take care of my sis. Flaked at the last minute, and made us go. (Sis wanted to Sis is God.)

Today: Said we would eat wherever my sister and I wanted. Flaked, and said we were eating at a pub, and called us ungrateful for wanting Chili's.

 

>_>_>_>_>_>

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Virginia. My mom came home at 10:00 PM, Saturday, and decided we were going with her to VA. It would be 'safer' for her sleeping kids to keep her awake as she drove...

 

She's REALLY pissing me off.

List:

Monday: supposed to go get PokeRanger. Flaked at last minute for overtime.

Wednesday: supposed to get PokeRanger and FF Warriors of ight. Flaked at last minute for being tired. Said we'd get them Friday.

Friday: supposed to go get the games. Flaked at last moment, and said I could only get one, because I 'commanded' (AKA I ASKED) her to get me the games. Just got Ranger. (NOTE: She claims that I get everything I ask for. Last time I got a game was March, except for cheapo games for the family)

Saturday: supposed to let me take care of my sis. Flaked at the last minute, and made us go. (Sis wanted to Sis is God.)

Today: Said we would eat wherever my sister and I wanted. Flaked, and said we were eating at a pub, and called us ungrateful for wanting Chili's.

 

>_>_>_>_>_>

 

Aww, poor baby doesn't get what he wants and starts to whine?

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