powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 I recently created a few Kirby cards and wanted to know what you think. Please note that I'm new and are not completely sure how to make the best cards or how to post them. If there are any Kirby's you want me to do, I will except requests. Lore: Once per turn, destroy 1 monster on the field then Special Summon from your deck, 1 "Kirby" monster with the same attribute as the destroyed monster. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. Take control of the selected monster. While that monster is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", destroy all DARK monsters on the field. While this card is on the field DARK monsters cannot be Summoned. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", put this card in defense position. This card cannot be sent to the graveyard while in defense position. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", return all other cards on the field to their owners hand. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", while this card remains face-up on the field, the field is treated as "Umi" If there is an active Field Spell Card on the field, this effect is not applied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 I recently created a few Kirby cards and wanted to know what you think. Please note that I'm new and are not completely sure how to make the best cards or how to post them. If there are any Kirby's you want me to do, I will except requests. Lore: Once per turn, destroy 1 monster on the field then Special Summon from your deck, 1 "Kirby" monster with the same attribute as the destroyed monster. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. Take control of the selected monster. While that monster is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", destroy all DARK monsters on the field. While this card is on the field DARK monsters cannot be Summoned. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", inflict 1000 damage to your opponent. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", put this card in defense position. This card cannot be sent to the graveyard while in defense position. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", return all other cards on the field to their owners hand. Lore: When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", while this card remains face-up on the field, the field is treated as "Umi" If there is an active Field Spell Card on the field, this effect is not applied. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Wh-what the? This is not OCG at all "When summoned by Kirby, it can turn one half of field to wasteland and the other to sea"? Doesnotmakesense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
おジャマ・キング Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Wh-what the? This is not OCG at all "When summoned by Kirby, it can turn one half of field to wasteland and the other to sea"? Doesnotmakesense. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 - Kirby should not be DIVINE. It, in fact, no other card, should be that strong to be Divine.- Several images need backgrounds ( eg. tornado/stone/fire Kirby)- Please use real Types:[spoiler= Real Types]Ghost= Fiend OR Zombie-TypeAngel= Fairy-TypeFire= Pyro-Type, because FIRE should be the AttributeStone= Rock-TypeTornado= Fairy-TypeWater= Aqua-Type -Learn correct OCG. Do not mix up descriptions with effects, like "blown back" or "evil". - A couple of them are overpowered. * Angel Kirby: 2000 or less DEF* Fire Kirby: 2000 or less ATK* Stone Kirby: Effect is very overpowered. A level 4 with 4000 DEF with no drawback? Overall, this Set does need a lot of adjustment, primarily in the OCG. Just look at other cards, and try to understand how to make proper effects. Other than that, they aren't horrible, but they aren't excellent. Just keep it up! 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Starly_64 Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 - Kirby should not be DIVINE. It, in fact, no other card, should be that strong to be Divine.- Several images need backgrounds ( eg. tornado/stone/fire Kirby)- Please use real Types:[spoiler= Real Types]Ghost= Fiend OR Zombie-TypeAngel= Fairy-TypeFire= Pyro-Type, because FIRE should be the AttributeStone= Rock-TypeTornado= Fairy-TypeWater= Aqua-Type -Learn correct OCG. Do not mix up descriptions with effects, like "blown back" or "evil". - A couple of them are overpowered. * Angel Kirby: 2000 or less DEF* Fire Kirby: 2000 or less ATK* Stone Kirby: Effect is very overpowered. A level 4 with 4000 DEF with no drawback? Overall, this Set does need a lot of adjustment, primarily in the OCG. Just look at other cards, and try to understand how to make proper effects. Other than that, they aren't horrible, but they aren't excellent. Just keep it up! 3/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 I'll try to fix 'em. Be right back... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 I'll try to fix 'em. Be right back... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenGhlahr Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 These effects are hard to understand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenGhlahr Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 These effects are hard to understand Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Can someone tell me a good type for Tornado Kirby? I can't see a good one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Can someone tell me a good type for Tornado Kirby? I can't see a good one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenGhlahr Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 A fairy? I don't know, that's just me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenGhlahr Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 A fairy? I don't know, that's just me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 I think I'll do thunder, relating to a storm.Can't find good backround for ghost.P.S. I'm editing my first post now.MASSIVE fix. All cards were fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 I think I'll do thunder, relating to a storm.Can't find good backround for ghost.P.S. I'm editing my first post now.MASSIVE fix. All cards were fixed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King of Yesonia Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Can someone tell me a good type for Tornado Kirby? I can't see a good one. Warrior! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeik Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 ok lets try and sort the OCG out here Kirby "Once per turn, destroy 1 monster on the field then Special Summon from your deck, 1 "Kirby" monster who's attribute is the same as the destroyed monster." Ghost "When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", you can select 1 monster on your opponent's side of the field. Take control of the selected monster. While that monster is face-up on your side of the field, your opponent cannot select this card as an attack target" Angel"When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", destroy all DARK monsters on the field. While this card is on the field DARK monsters cannot be Summoned or Set." Fire"When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", inflict 1000 damage to your opponent." Stone (don't really get this one but I will try, oh and replace the numbers with bullet points)"When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", Select and activate 1 of these effects; 1.All Set monsters gain 500 DEF 2. Discard 1 card from your hand when you Set a monster, that monster gains 1000 DEF." Tornado (OP'D by the way)"When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", return all other cards on the field to there owners hand." Water"When this card is summoned by the effect of "Kirby", while this card remains face-up on the field, the field is treated as "Umi" (however there is no increasing or decreasing of ATK/DEF due to "Umi"'s effect). If there is an active Field Spell Card on the field, this effect is not applied." hope that helped Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Some stuff.Great! I'll add those....Wait.... Where'd the rest of your comment go?Good. The rest of the comment's back. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeik Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 I think my Internet is acting up or something I'll re-edit Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Though I added this to my title, any Kirby's you want me to do I'll do. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GenGhlahr Posted June 27, 2010 Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Maybe ghost kirby should be a zombie and kirby a fairy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
powersman77 Posted June 27, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 27, 2010 Ghost Kirby's not really a zombie, just a ghost, and Kirby's a "Star Warrior".Thanks for the support though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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