holymaic Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrogMan Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Oh I know what his weakness is! He loves perfection! Centimeter wise that is. And "he" should be capital. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 The image is okay... The Name is simple.Capitalise Warrior.Maybe change ATK/DEF? seems a bit overpowered I'd recon 2600 ATK / 2500 DEF would be alright.Now description is kind of lame maybe try "Death is the son of the ghoulish fiend known as the Grim Reaper." That would be good for the first line as for other lines... Try incorporating some of his traits and some likeliness of his father. Overall its alright but could do with some work. Nice to see a vanilla monster ^_^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GrogMan Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 Wait! Halt! There is a rule that states that normal monsters cannot be stronger than Blue Eyes White Dragon. This monster clearly has 200 more ATK and 100 more DEF. This card is a violation of the Vanilla Law. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
holymaic Posted June 28, 2010 Author Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 The image is okay... The Name is simple.Capitalise Warrior.Maybe change ATK/DEF? seems a bit overpowered I'd recon 2600 ATK / 2500 DEF would be alright.Now description is kind of lame maybe try "Death is the son of the ghoulish fiend known as the Grim Reaper." That would be good for the first line as for other lines... Try incorporating some of his traits and some likeliness of his father. Overall its alright but could do with some work. Nice to see a vanilla monster ^_^hes the son of death! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Limited Edition KING Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 hes the son of death! Then why did you write "Grim Reaper" in the description? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted June 28, 2010 Report Share Posted June 28, 2010 The son of the Grim Reaper. He is perfect in every way except he has one weakness... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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