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  • 3 weeks later...

I don't care about backgrounds, but these cards are pretty crappy. The Supers (and "Hyper Shadic") are the same as every other idiot's version of them. No points for imagination or creativity there. Most of the pics are alright.

The main reason for not having fake types is that you can't use any support with them except the ones you make yourself. And you haven't made any support, so use real types.

The cards don't have to name themselves, just say "this card" or "this monster", unless it has an effect that would be stackable otherwise eg. "Dark Room of Nightmare", which adds 300 to any damage caused to your opponent except that caused by itself and other "Dark Room of Nightmare". Eggman's first bit "With Doctor Eggman on the field" is redundant, because it has to be on the field for its effect to activate anyway. Take that out. And you Summon Tokens, not 'create' them. Shadow's effect should be changed to simply "This card cannot be destroyed by a card effect." With Sonic's effect, don't put flavour text in effects. It makes them more interesting, but also more ambiguous and confusing, which this game has enough of already.

For your Ritual (if you must keep it as such), Ritual Summons should be labeled as such, not just as a Special Summon.

The Normal Monsters don't have that great flavour text either. Try to have at least two sentences.

 

Overall, CND-3.

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