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1 tuner + 1or more non-tuner monsters

When this card destroys a monster by battle and sends it to the Graveyard, gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. If this card is in the Graveyard, Special Summond one Dark-Type monster from either player's Graveyard.

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ocg error

 

"If this card is in the Graveyard' date=' Special Summon one DARK monster from either player's Graveyard"

 

there arent any drawbacks to this?

 

8.5/10

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shouldn't it be "1 DARK monster" instead of "one DARK monster"?

 

needs drawbacks..

7/10

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ocg error

 

"If this card is in the Graveyard' date=' Special Summon one DARK monster from either player's Graveyard"

 

there arent any drawbacks to this?

 

8.5/10

[/quote']

shouldn't it be "1 DARK monster" instead of "one DARK monster"?

 

needs drawbacks..

7/10

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ocg error

 

"If this card is in the Graveyard' date=' Special Summon one DARK monster from either player's Graveyard"

 

there arent any drawbacks to this?

 

8.5/10

[/quote']

shouldn't it be "1 DARK monster" instead of "one DARK monster"?

 

needs drawbacks..

7/10

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ocg error

 

"If this card is in the Graveyard' date=' Special Summon one DARK monster from either player's Graveyard"

 

there arent any drawbacks to this?

 

8.5/10

[/quote']

shouldn't it be "1 DARK monster" instead of "one DARK monster"?

 

needs drawbacks..

7/10

 

It does need drawbacks, also, if you didn't notice, it has the abilty to summon itself, kinda like Colossul Fighter, kinda overpowered, even if it is level 10.

 

lol Remove the "d" in Summon, and one is change to 1

 

I don't see how gaining Life Points fits with him.

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ocg error

 

"If this card is in the Graveyard' date=' Special Summon one DARK monster from either player's Graveyard"

 

there arent any drawbacks to this?

 

8.5/10

[/quote']

shouldn't it be "1 DARK monster" instead of "one DARK monster"?

 

needs drawbacks..

7/10

 

It does need drawbacks, also, if you didn't notice, it has the abilty to summon itself, kinda like Colossul Fighter, kinda overpowered, even if it is level 10.

 

lol Remove the "d" in Summon, and one is change to 1

 

I don't see how gaining Life Points fits with him.

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ocg error

 

"If this card is in the Graveyard' date=' Special Summon one DARK monster from either player's Graveyard"

 

there arent any drawbacks to this?

 

8.5/10

[/quote']

shouldn't it be "1 DARK monster" instead of "one DARK monster"?

 

needs drawbacks..

7/10

 

It does need drawbacks, also, if you didn't notice, it has the abilty to summon itself, kinda like Colossul Fighter, kinda overpowered, even if it is level 10.

 

lol Remove the "d" in Summon, and one is change to 1

 

I don't see how gaining Life Points fits with him.

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1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card destroys a monster, gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. If this card is in the Graveyard, Special Summon one Dark-Type monster from either player's Graveyard.

 

OCG Fixed

Was alot of uneeded words in their.

 

As for rate, as stated above, needs draw backs, maybe a limit on the Level or ATK of the monster you can summon or something like that, idk.

 

7/10

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1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card destroys a monster, gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. If this card is in the Graveyard, Special Summon one Dark-Type monster from either player's Graveyard.

 

OCG Fixed

Was alot of uneeded words in their.

 

As for rate, as stated above, needs draw backs, maybe a limit on the Level or ATK of the monster you can summon or something like that, idk.

 

7/10

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1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card destroys a monster, gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. If this card is in the Graveyard, Special Summon one Dark-Type monster from either player's Graveyard.

 

OCG Fixed

Was alot of uneeded words in their.

 

As for rate, as stated above, needs draw backs, maybe a limit on the Level or ATK of the monster you can summon or something like that, idk.

 

7/10

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1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card destroys a monster' date=' gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. If this card is in the Graveyard, Special Summon one Dark-Type monster from either player's Graveyard.

 

OCG Fixed

Was alot of uneeded words in their.

 

As for rate, as stated above, needs draw backs, maybe a limit on the Level or ATK of the monster you can summon or something like that, idk.

 

7/10

[/quote']

 

The words are kinda needed, it would be overpowered if it didn't have "and sends it to the Graveyard" (Cactus Fighter has an OTK because that part isn't added), also if it's just "destroy" then destroy by what? By Battle or Effect? (Elecfox easily points this out)

 

There's no such thing as a Dark-Type monster, only DARK monsters and "one" should be changed to "1"

those are the only actual errors and also the "If this card is in the graveyard, Special Summon 1 DARK monster from either player's Graveyard" confuses me and doesn't make sense especially since it has no drawbacks what so ever.

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1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card destroys a monster' date=' gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. If this card is in the Graveyard, Special Summon one Dark-Type monster from either player's Graveyard.

 

OCG Fixed

Was alot of uneeded words in their.

 

As for rate, as stated above, needs draw backs, maybe a limit on the Level or ATK of the monster you can summon or something like that, idk.

 

7/10

[/quote']

 

The words are kinda needed, it would be overpowered if it didn't have "and sends it to the Graveyard" (Cactus Fighter has an OTK because that part isn't added), also if it's just "destroy" then destroy by what? By Battle or Effect? (Elecfox easily points this out)

 

There's no such thing as a Dark-Type monster, only DARK monsters and "one" should be changed to "1"

those are the only actual errors and also the "If this card is in the graveyard, Special Summon 1 DARK monster from either player's Graveyard" confuses me and doesn't make sense especially since it has no drawbacks what so ever.

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1 Tuner monster + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

When this card destroys a monster' date=' gain Life Points equal to that monster's ATK. You can pay 1000 Life Points to negate the activation of a Spell or Trap Card. If this card is in the Graveyard, Special Summon one Dark-Type monster from either player's Graveyard.

 

OCG Fixed

Was alot of uneeded words in their.

 

As for rate, as stated above, needs draw backs, maybe a limit on the Level or ATK of the monster you can summon or something like that, idk.

 

7/10

[/quote']

 

The words are kinda needed, it would be overpowered if it didn't have "and sends it to the Graveyard" (Cactus Fighter has an OTK because that part isn't added), also if it's just "destroy" then destroy by what? By Battle or Effect? (Elecfox easily points this out)

 

There's no such thing as a Dark-Type monster, only DARK monsters and "one" should be changed to "1"

those are the only actual errors and also the "If this card is in the graveyard, Special Summon 1 DARK monster from either player's Graveyard" confuses me and doesn't make sense especially since it has no drawbacks what so ever.

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