DarthSuhail Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Howdy guys, this is a bad tag, I need massive improvement, if you could tell me ways of improvement... Please do! Enjoy! Here it is: [/center] Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
So Legit You Quit Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 Well, The text is a no and i see no flow. Tag seems overblended too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasir Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 what happened to pain's eyes it would be much better if he had the right eyes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toffee. Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 what happened to pain's eyes it would be much better if he had the right eyes His eyes were purple -> rainbow -> red -> purple -> then they finally decided on a white-ish color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nasir Posted July 1, 2010 Report Share Posted July 1, 2010 what happened to pain's eyes it would be much better if he had the right eyes His eyes were purple -> rainbow -> red -> purple -> then they finally decided on a white-ish color. oh ok i thought the colors other than purple were fanfics Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 The text is crap. Oddly made. You need to read tutorials, cuz this lacks alot of basics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest JoshIcy Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Well' date=' The text is a [b']no[/b] and i see no flow. Tag seems overblended too. The text is crap. Oddly made. You need to read tutorials' date=' cuz this lacks alot of basics.[/quote'] So inform him on HOW to fix instead of just slapping terms he likely does not know how to fix/what it means in his face. Can we see the Render? And what Program did you use? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-DG- Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Icy, here's my post in better CnC form: The tag is decent' date=' but it lacks a few things. First off, I can't really see flow with this. Mainly because you chose a render that's upright, which makes flow a bit more difficult. I'd use more dynamic renders to get better flow options going. If you're going to use text, first thing you need to know is matching colors. Use a matching color as the basis for text, and, then, use a font that suits the style and render. Right now, you'd have done better if you'd have gone with an orange-ish color and a japanese font, using actual Kanji. Use a lighter BG. We can't really tell what's going on with the tag. That's all for now.[/quote'] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 You're colors are dull and boring, you should always choose atleast 2 main colors to use in a tag that are different from each other but still suit eachother.You're flow is bad, since you've flapped so many C4D's on each other, without making them help the flow.You've got no clear light source and barely any lighting. You should use the Blend tool/white soft brush/dodge/burn to create your tag a lighting that fits with the render/stock and the rest, creating a harmony within the tag.You're tag has some depth, but it doesn't look good atm, mainly because there are some many C4D's which make the tag look chaotic and at the same time pretty much destroy your depth. So I'd say, lose the text, edit the lighting, take off most of the C4D's and try to find a better, cleaner way to make it look good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Thanks guys, I used GIMP to make it, and erm... It was stock so that was one of the reasons it went bad, and I can't find any good renders of Pein. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Seta Posted July 2, 2010 Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Render yourself or request one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 2, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2010 Render yourself or request one? I tried to make another, Il upload in a min. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DarthSuhail Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 I'm gunna BUMP this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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