LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 *Banner used for entertainment purposes only, not by me, will not be official banner. From: http://fc02.deviantart.com/fs27/f/2008/109/a/4/Devil_May_Cry_Dante_Banner_by_xXsparrowgirlXx.jpgAs from an earlier preview, I had declared that I am making some DMC themed cards.Here are the 3 main monster cards just as a demo.If you have any OCG fixes, effect changes or different ideas, please share <3. [align=center]This card can only be Summoned while there is a Fiend-Type monster on the field. Each time this card attacks, place 1 Trigger Counter on it (max. 3). You can Tribute this card with 3 Trigger Counters to Special Summon 1 "Demon Hunter Devil Trigger Dante".This card cannot be Summoned except by the effect of "Demon Hunter Dante". This card gains ATK equal to the total Level of monsters your opponent controls x100. If this card were to be destroyed, you can send it to the Graveyard and Special Summon 1 "Demon Hunter Dante" from your Graveyard. This card is destroyed during the 3rd Standby Phase after Summoning.This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing up to 2 Fiend-Type monsters you control. A monster destroyed in battle by this card is removed from play. Each time this card attacks, place 1 Trigger Counter on it (max. 3). When this card is selected as an attack target, you can remove 1 Trigger Counter from this card to negate it. You can Tribute this card with 3 Trigger Counters on it to Special Summon 1 "Demon Hunter Devil Hunter Vergil".[/align] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 There are two spaces between sentences. Will look at OCG later. Nice pics. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 I think "Demon Hunter Dante" should (probably) be a Level 4, because he's a little underpowered for a Level 5.Other than that, I think these cards are great. Can't wait to see the full set.9.999/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 There are two spaces between sentences. Will look at OCG later. Nice pics.Where? And okay I think "Demon Hunter Dante" should (probably) be a Level 4' date=' because he's a little underpowered for a Level 5.Other than that, I think these cards are great. Can't wait to see the full set.9.999/10[/quote']I thought Level 5 cos the Fiend enemies were going to be the main monster/ tribute fodder etc. Plus he's weak too cos there are Equips which give additional effects to the cards =P Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 The first card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 The first card. I don't really see anything wrong with it. Is it only a double space that's bothering you O_O Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeosWiseman Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 "Demon Hunter Devil Trigger Dante" or "Demon Hunter Dante Devil Trigger"? Which one will it be?You used both referring to the same card.In the Devil Trigger: If this card were to be destroyed=If this card would be destroyedOverall, 9.7/10Nicely done! The pics are awesome! ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Yeah, .Each should be . Each, and etc. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 "Demon Hunter Devil Trigger Dante" or "Demon Hunter Dante Devil Trigger"? Which one will it be?You used both referring to the same card.In the Devil Trigger: If this card were to be destroyed=If this card would be destroyedOverall' date=' 9.7/10Nicely done! The pics are awesome! ^^[/quote']Oh riiight, how clever of you to spot that XD (I didn't)Gonna change that later then =D Thanks lol ;) Yeah' date=' .Each should be . Each, and etc.[/quote'] Oh well I'll fix all that before I post them XD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Yeah' date=' .Each should be . Each, and etc.[/quote'] Oh well I'll fix all that before I post them XD Maybe the card maker should do that? ...Maybe I'll suggest that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 I looked back at Dante, I see no error in the spacing :\ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Hmm, the lore you posted is still incorrect. And believe you put 1 space instead of 2. Sorry for being annoying, but it does prevent any other 'Grammar Police' from coming along. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 'er on the field. Each time' What's wrong with that space? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Shouldn't it be two instead of one? But never mind that, I meant on the lore below the card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 It's only one space after a full stop. Positive. ._. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Hmm, I've always been told two. But this says otherwise. Though, real cards (not the text next to it, that follows the above), say two spaces. (Checked on card maker) I find it ridiculous were having this discussion, even though it does increase posts for this thread. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Well tbh, I'm going to use proper grammar for my cards XD If cards need 2 spaces, then I'm not gonna, but I've always used 1 space and it's never been a problem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Do as you must.*still laughing on this side of the monitor due to hilarity of conversation* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 lol. It's only funny cos you keep saying there's something wrong with a space! (And space is nothing ;)) Therefore you're laughing at nothing. =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Yet nothing is something, so I'll keep laughing...done. Posting anymore cards? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 Aha. No new cards yet, this is really only a preview. The full set will be coming out soon, after I make a few boosters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 You make boosters? Mind pming me an example? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 I don't make boosters anymore D: I actually deleted all my Booster kits :) CRAP! I also deleted my Image archive! >:@ ¬_¬ Great. No boosters, no gold edits, no dark synchros, no card images... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
HitoKage Posted July 3, 2010 Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 That's not good, when did you delete them? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LiAM Posted July 3, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2010 I deleted them when I decided to leave YCM. XD But I came back, forgetting that I deleted all my resources. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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