Monster of the Hidden Mist

[M.B X]

Kisame Hoshigaki

 

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Note: I have been making GFX for a along time now, but am a bit rusty these days. So please NO FLAMING, only give Constructive Criticism. Thanks for looking :)

[wero-vasto]

*open the door*

*gets in*

 

Oh... I believe that this is my first posting here =S but for ma friend ^^

I like the blue tone... but maybe leave the render without the tone?

IDK =S just posting cuz you ask it xD

 

I really like it :3

 

Now leaving to RC ^^

 

*leaves*

*close the door*

[General Assclown]

*open the door*

*gets in*

 

Oh... I believe that this is my first posting here =S but for ma friend ^^

I like the blue tone... but maybe leave the render without the tone?

IDK =S just posting cuz you ask it xD

 

I really like it :3

 

Now leaving to RC ^^

 

*leaves*

*close the door*

 

WTF? ._.

 

Uhh, what do you mean by "original"?

But anyway, text is bad. Doesn't flow with the tag.

I can see some flow, which is good.

Not sure if it's proper lighting. Because on the sword, the light comes from a completely different angle.

[Night]

*open the door*

*gets in*

 

Oh... I believe that this is my first posting here =S but for ma friend ^^

I like the blue tone... but maybe leave the render without the tone?

IDK =S just posting cuz you ask it xD

 

I really like it :3

 

Now leaving to RC ^^

 

*leaves*

*close the door*

 

WTF? ._.

 

Uhh' date=' what do you mean by "original"?

But anyway, text is bad. Doesn't flow with the tag.

I can see some flow, which is good.

Not sure if it's proper lighting. Because on the sword, the light comes from a completely different angle.

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Can you stop failing? He said it was his first post in showcase. And he seems to already know more than you do. There is no lighting in the tag. flow is barely visible. The blur of the render destroys any chance of flow, a motion blur would have been better choice. Text is waaaayyyy to far from the focal. would have done better on the right side of the tag instead of the left.