Dandelo Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Okay, I already know the OCG at the end is terrible. Help on that would be greatly appreciated. If it's confusing, I suppose I can try and explain it: Once per turn, you can reveal a Trap Card that is already Set or one in your hand. If you do this, if your opponent has a Set Trap Card or 1 in his/her hand, your opponent must reveal that Trap Card. You can shuffle the Trap Card you revealed into your Deck to destroy the Trap Card your opponent revealed... and inflict the damage. This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned except by sending 1 card with "Jinzo" in its name on the field to the Graveyard and Tributing 2 Trap Cards you control. Trap Cards cannot be activated and the effects of all Trap Cards on the field are negated. When this card is Summoned, destroy all face-up Trap Cards on your opponent's side of the field. Inflict 500 damage to your opponent for each card destroyed by this effect. Once per turn, you can reveal 1 Set Trap Card on your side of the field or in your hand. If you do, your opponent must reveal 1 Set Trap Card on their side of the field or hand if they can. If an opponent's Trap Card is revealed by this effect, you can shuffle 1 Set Trap Card or Trap Card in your hand into your Deck to destroy your opponent's Trap Card and inflict 500 damage to your opponent. When this card is removed from the field, you can send a number of Trap Cards from your Deck to the Graveyard to Special Summon 1 "Jinzo" from your hand, Deck, or Graveyard. After a number of turns equal to the number of Trap Cards sent to the Graveyard, destroy the Summoned monster. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 I think OCG is fine. Nice pic, cool effect. Last part is very original. 9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mentor-of-spells Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 I think OCG is fine. Nice pic' date=' cool effect. Last part is very original. 9/10[/quote'] I agree with Domi, it's a very nice card... good picture, good effect, etc. 9.1/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Jinzo Just got an Upgrade Love it but i would prob run normal Jinzo over him cause of difficulty of actually getting Him out Love the cardJinzo Returner decks thank you for your hard work 8/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 I think OCG is fine. Nice pic' date=' cool effect. Last part is very original. 9/10[/quote'] I agree with Domi, it's a very nice card... good picture, good effect, etc. 9.1/10 I would kill you if you wouldn't. :PAnyway this card is really hard to summon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Haha, what if I changed it to send 1 Jinzo or Jinzo - Lord? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Umm i would say Jinzo but lord just seems like it fits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Haha' date=' what if I changed it to send 1 Jinzo or Jinzo - Lord?[/quote'] Maybe, but add a drawback then like both of you lose life points when you destroy opponen't trap card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Edited. Made it Jinzo OR Jinzo - Lord, haha. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 I said, add a drawback. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Original great pic but minor ocg This card can only be Special Summoned except by sending 1 face-up "Jinzo" or "Jinzo - Lord" you 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
senatheEND Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Awesome xD 9.8/10 cause nothings perfect Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hollow Ichigo! Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 i'll agree to that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CMRenji Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Excellent Card. The image is good, the effect is good. 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Summoning conditions are now you can remove 1 Jinzo from play OR just Tribute 1 Jinzo - Lord. That way it's more of a drawback, i.e. removing Jinzo from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Smesh Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 I think OCG is fine. Nice pic' date=' cool effect. Last part is very original. 9/10[/quote'] same. i wish someone would make an archetype of jinzo Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windninja96 Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 nice the pic effect and the OCG are very, very good. 9.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 I think OCG is fine. Nice pic' date=' cool effect. Last part is very original. 9/10[/quote'] same. i wish someone would make an archetype of jinzo Haha, i'm actually trying... just uh, fitting pictures are hard to come by. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Lovely lovely... added the effect from the Anime Jinzo - Lord.... seems a good card really.... actually This > Jinzo - Lord thought ;D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted July 8, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 Lovely lovely... added the effect from the Anime Jinzo - Lord.... seems a good card really.... actually This > Jinzo - Lord thought ;D Haha, I was hoping it'd be better than Jinzo - Lord. That was kind of the point. Thanks for the comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 8, 2010 Report Share Posted July 8, 2010 This is quite nice - As far as I can tell, no OCG errors. However, I agree with the abouve - too hard to Summon. Still, nice idea (we need more support for Jinzos!) 9.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 He's not that difficult to Summon... I mean, you can choose to remove "Jinzo" from play, and he's not that hard to get out. Or you can wait until "Jinzo - Lord" is out, that way your Jinzo isn't removed from play. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Domi the Mystery Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Or you must wait to get both cards in your hand. :? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dandelo Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Heh, I guess. Maybe I could make his Summoning conditions Trap-based? As in, remove a certain number of Trap Cards from play, or discard a certain number, etc.? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RickiMinaj Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 It's great, But i would have had you tribute Jinzo #7 to bring this freak out instead of regular jinzo or jinzo lord. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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