Icebound Kingdom - 5/??

[Ignis avis]

[spoiler=Monsters][spoiler=Normal]

 

[spoiler=Effect]

 

[spoiler=Synchro]

 

 

 

[spoiler=Spells]

 

 

Constructive criticism welcome, but just posting bad OCG, or needs changed is not. If you have problems with a card explain why.

 

 

Picture credit: Jazin Kay, Wanderley

OCG corrections: Max Darkness.

[Smesh]

Sorceror of snow should be an effect monster, (there is a tuner option). most of the cards are pretty boring, add some more effects. 5/10

[Ignis avis]

There are other normal tuners see tune warrior for an example. Although they aren't common it is possible.

[psychicplayer]

So broken. Equip Spell+Synchro= Definate Win. No. All you need is something to protect the equip and brokeness. No, just no...

[Ignis avis]

Changed the equip spell. No longer an OP combo.

[Zeik]

pretty basic nothing to amazing, OCG looks good and images are fine 7/10

[Max Darkness]

Sorcerer of Snow

Boring but nothing else.

 

 

Glacial Blade

Other Level 4 cards that negate the effects of Flip Effect monsters are "Paladin of White Dragon" (a Ritual monster) and "Silent Swordsman LV4" (which needs to be Special Summoned, or Set first). And neither give draw power.

Very overpowered, due to its high ATK and constant draw power.

 

 

Snow Princess

A Level 5 Synchro (so incredibly easy to summon) that cannot be destroyed by card effects? And alongside that, if this damage it causes is doubled. So, striking a non-countered "Breaker" will cause 1000 points of damage in one hit.

So, it is easy to summon, nearly impossible to destroy and can easily deplete your opponent's Life Points. Where are the downsides/hinderances? Unless you add them, then this thing is stupidly overpowered.

In addition, since it's a Synchro Tuner, that implies there's an Accel Synchro counterpart which will be even more powerful...which isn't a good thing.

 

 

Snowflake

Still a problem, since it protects the Synchro from battle destruction, but better than it was.

 

 

Snowbound Graveyard

Not only does it give an "Umiruka"-esque power boost, but to both ATK and DEF (so "Mobius the Ice Monarch" = 2900 ATK; "Daedalus" = 3400 ATK), but you can discard to Special Summon any WATER monster from your Graveyard. "Orca Mega-Fortress of Darkness", "Mobius the Frost Monarch", or simply the required materials for a Synchro Summon.

A Level 8 for 1 card... "The Creator" does the same, but has to be Summoned, usually by Tribute Setting, and then cannot be Summoned from the Graveyard itself. This is once again, broken.

 

 

In addition to these cards' blatent un-balanced strength, your OCG needs a lot of work.

[Ignis avis]

Glacial blade only allows you to draw when a face-down monster is attacked. Face up monsters do not. Snow Princess has the drawback that if she's attacked by a monster with a higher attack you take double the damage. I made Snowflake a slightly different Ribbon of Rebirth. Which returns the monster to the field, this just is removed from play instead of the monster.

 

I'll work on the field spell, and could you tell me where the OCG problems are instead of just saying I need to work on it. Just saying I need to improve does not help me improve.

[Max Darkness]

Glacial blade only allows you to draw when a face-down monster is attacked. Face up monsters do not.

 

But it also negates the effect. "Paladin of White Dragon" has no other effect than negating the effect (by preventing the monster being flipped). Negating it and then drawing is too much of an effect for a monster that can be Normal and Special Summoned without restrictions.

 

 

Snow Princess has the drawback that if she's attacked by a monster with a higher attack you take double the damage.

 

The problem that she cannot be destroyed by card effects remains. Perhaps reduce it to Spell-immunity. Otherwise' date=' it can still run rampant with your opponent with cards like "Umiruka" and "United We Stand".

 

 

I made Snowflake a slightly different Ribbon of Rebirth. Which returns the monster to the field, this just is removed from play instead of the monster.

 

It's better than it was, but it could still be abused in an "Umi" Deck.

 

I'll work on the field spell' date=' and could you tell me where the OCG problems are instead of just saying I need to work on it. Just saying I need to improve does not help me improve.

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Glacial Blade

 

Negate the effects of face-down monsters this card battles.

 

 

Ice Princess

 

1 WATER Tuner + 1 or more non-Tuner monsters

This card cannot be destroyed by the effects of Spell Cards. Double any battle damage from battles involving this card.

 

 

Snowflake

 

Equip only to a WATER monster. If the equipped monster would be destroyed, you can remove this card from play instead.

[Wanderley]

please credit me too XD

[Ignis avis]

Thank you for the OCG corrections. I fixed them, and changed the field spell. Now it's level 4, or lower, and they lose 500 ATK, and DEF

[Wanderley]

please credit me too XD

[Ignis avis]

pretty basic nothing to amazing, OCG looks good and images are fine 7/10

 

For this? It encouraged me that's true, but overall it didn't help.

[Wanderley]

http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/2047/568510.jpg

http://img820.imageshack.us/img820/7258/568510a.jpg

 

these are my images credit me -.-'

[Ignis avis]

Sorry I forgot where I got those pictures. I'll add you up top.

[speedlp]

wow