lolwhy Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 [align=center]Obsidian Prodigy[spoiler=Version #2] This card cannot be Special Summoned. This card can only be Normal Summoned by Tributing 3 monsters you control. While this card is face up its Attribute is also treated as LIGHT. After the 6th turn that this card is Summoned, this card cannot be targeted by the effects of Spells, Traps or Effect Monsters. During each of your Battle Phases, roll a six sided die: *1: If your opponent controls no cards except Defense Position Monster Cards, this card can attack your opponent directly. *3: If this card would destroy a monster, return it to the top of the owner's Deck instead. *6: Discard 3 cards from the top of your Deck and Special Summon any monsters discarded by this effect. At the end of your Battle Phase, return any card Special Summoned by this effect to the top of your Deck in any order.[/align] You know the drill. Please, no "kewl pic X/10" or "Bad OCG X/10" or "OP'd X/10". Please give valid reasons why you rated it so. Constructive criticism is very welcome. EDIT:So it's OP'd... Gonna fix now. Will fix image later. Card Grammar is fixed, should be less OP'd. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 You stole my name D: JK OT:To the last effect add "during the End Phase of this turn." The 3 effect is OPed a little :/ makes a dead draw to your opponent D:but...I like it ^^ May I have the picture plz?^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 I stole your name? D: I shall change! But yeah, I changed 2-5 effect; I shall PM the image right now :P. PS: 401! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zextra Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Really nice card! Good OCG, balanced (I think) effect, really nice name and picture. Congratulations for becoming a 4-Star! 9.5/10 :D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
wero-vasto Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 I stole your name? D: I shall change! But yeah' date=' I changed 2-5 effect; I shall PM the image right now :P. PS: 401![/quote'] Congratz ^^ thank for the image ^^ I meant the name cuz the monster in your image is the same I use with my Gemknight Obsidius D: that comes from Obsidian ._____. yeah .... you get it :P Congratz again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Congrats for becoming a 4*.Pic is very good, but unfortunatly the Holoing kinda ruins it.OCG looks ok, but I'm not shure you can skip numbers in a dice effect.Effect is also OPing, if you really intent to keep it invulnerable to effects I suggest making it a 3 Tribute monster. And it's "6" effect makes no sence, when do they return to your Deck?A 8/10 P.S. Where did you get that pic? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Congrats for becoming a 4*.Pic is very good' date=' but unfortunatly the Holoing kinda ruins it.OCG looks ok, but I'm not shure you can skip numbers in a dice effect.Effect is also OPing, if you really intent to keep it invulnerable to effects I suggest making it a 3 Tribute monster. And it's "6" effect makes no sence, when do they return to your Deck?A 8/10 P.S. Where did you get that pic?[/quote'] Yeah I should make it a 3 Tribute D: I'll fix soon.... But the again it requires a certain amount of turns, in which anything can happen. I got it from Pixiv.net Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lexadin Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Of course Pixiv! I should look there way more often. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 bump Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mysterium Tremendum Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 o OCG: Flawless - 3/2o Image: Perfect, although I think it kind of stretches the name a little bit since it looks like an android or something to me. Can I also get the image please or where you found it? - 3/3o Effect: Creative, new, innovative. I think the *6 effect... is hard to grade. On one hand the dice roll makes the effect unlikely, a 1 : 6 chance so it is unlikely to happen but it seems to me balanced in some way - 4/4o Extra thoughts: all in all, great card, would be a staple in almost any deck - 1/1 11/10Nice job Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lolwhy Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Thanks, for that extreme rate hahaha; I shall continue, try to, produce high quality cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mehmani Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 The OCG is perfect, the image is great and it's original and fairly balanced. You've only got a half-chance of getting an extra effect and a 1/6 chance of getting the one you want. It wouldn't have many uses in the current metagame but it's a solid card. 8.6/10. Keep at it, you're great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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