CarlinFan Posted July 9, 2010 Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Hey all. This is my Bleach card set. I'm going to be updating this fairly regularly. It's divided into characters/groups (so Ichigo and all related cards come first, then Rukia, etc.). Please post constructive criticism and help me with my OCG, which could use improvement. I'd appreciate avoiding really short comments like "this is good". If you have the time, I'd like it if you could give me a 1-10/10 rating and some comments. Thanks, all. First up, the Ichigo group. [spoiler=Ichigo Cards: 000-006] [spoiler=Card Lore]Ichigo Kurosaki - New Hollow FormWhen this monster is summoned, place three "Hollow Form Counters" on it. Remove one "Hollow Form Counter" from this card each of your standby phases. When this monster has no "Hollow Form Counters" on it, it is removed from play and "Ichigo Kurosaki - Bankai" is Special Summoned. This monster is also treated as Warrior-type. This monster cannot be normal summoned or set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Orihime Inoue". This card's owner can negate any card effect targeting it unless there is a face-up monster on the opponent's field with higher ATK than this monster. While this monster is face-up on your field, no other monster on your field may enter battle. Ichigo Kurosaki - ShinigamiWhen this monster destroys a monster in battle, increase its original ATK and DEF by 200. When this monster is destroyed while "Orihime Inoue" is face-up on your field, Special Summon "Hollow Ichigo - New Hollow Form" from your hand or deck and shuffle your deck. Getsuga TenshoThis card may only be activated when a monster with "Kurosaki" in its name attacks. Increase its ATK by 400. If the defending monster is destroyed, apply one of the following effects:-If the destroyed monster was in ATK position, double the battle damage. Triple it if the attacking monster has "Bankai" or "Hollow" in its name. -If the destroyed monster was in DEF position, then divide the difference between the attacking monster's ATK and the destroyed monster's DEF by 100 (rounding up to the nearest whole number). Send that many cards from your opponent's deck to the graveyard. Double the number of cards if the attacking monster has "Hollow" or "Bankai" in its name. Bankai - Tensa ZangetsuThis card can only be activated when "Ichigo Kurosaki - Shinigami" is face-up on your field. You can send "Ichigo Kurosaki - Shinigami" to the graveyard and special summon one "Ichigo Kurosaki - Bankai" from your hand or deck. If "Ichigo Kurosaki - Shinigami" was the subject of a card effect, you can choose for that effect to carry over to "Ichigo Kurosaki - Bankai". If an Equip Spell card was equipped to "Ichigo Kurosaki - Shinigami", you can choose for it to be equipped to "Ichigo Kurosaki - Bankai" instead of it being sent to the graveyard. Ichigo Kurosaki - BankaiThis monster can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Bankai - Tensa Zangetsu". When this monster is summoned, you can search your deck for one "Getsuga Tensho" and place it in your hand. Then shuffle your deck. Increase this monster's ATK and DEF by the same amount "Ichigo Kurosaki - Shinigami"'s ATK and DEF were increased by "Ichigo Kurosaki - Shinigami"'s effect at the time of this monster's summoning. HollowficationThis card may only be activated when a monster with "Ichigo Kurosaki", "Hiyori Sarugaki", "Shinji Hirako", "Mashiro Kuna", "Kensei Muguruma", "Rose Otobayashi", "Love Aikawa", "Hachigen Ushoda", "Lisa Yadomaru", or "Kaname Tosen" in its name is face-up on your field. Select a monster fitting the above criteria and send it to the graveyard. Special summon a monster with the name of the destroyed card in its name and with a name ending in "- Hollow" from your hand, deck, or graveyard. If the destroyed monster was the subject of a card effect, you can choose for that effect to carry over to the summoned monster. If an Equip Spell card was equipped to the destroyed monster, you can choose for it to be equipped to the summoned monster instead of it being sent to the graveyard. Ichigo Kurosaki - HollowThis monster is also treated as Warrior-type. This monster can not be Normal Summoned or Set. This monster can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Hollowfication". When this monster is summoned, you can search your deck for one "Getsuga Tensho" and place it in your hand. Then shuffle your deck. Increase this monster's ATK and DEF by the same amount "Ichigo Kurosaki - Bankai"'s were increased by "Ichigo Kurosaki - Bankai"'s effect at the time of this monster's summoning. [spoiler=Rukia cards: 007-011] [spoiler=Card Lore]Rukia KuchikiWhen this monster is summoned, you may add one Spell or Trap card with "Sode no Shirayuki" in its name to your hand from your deck or graveyard. Each standby phase, you may add one Spell or Trap card with "Sode no Shirayuki" in its name to your hand from your deck or graveyard. Sode no Shirayuki - First DanceThis card can only be activated when "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami" enters battle. If "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami" is being attacked and the attacking monster's DEF is lower than "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami"'s ATK, subtract the difference from your opponent's Life Points and destroy the attacking monster. If "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami" is attacking and the defending monster's ATK is lower than "Rukia Kuchiki"'s DEF, subtract the difference from your opponent's Life Points and destroy the defending monster. Sode no Shirayuki - Next DanceThis card can only be activated when "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami" is face-up on your side of the field. Select one monster on your opponent's side of the field. If the monster is face down, it is flipped. Flip effects are not activated. If the target monster's DEF is lower than "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami"'s ATK, the target monster is destroyed and you can send one card from your opponent's hand or deck to the graveyard. If the target monster's DEF is higher than "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami"'s ATK, place one "White Ripple" counter on the target monster (max. 1). While a monster has a "White Ripple" counter on it, its ATK and DEF are reduced by 300 and it cannot attack, activate its effect, or change positions. If the target monster's effect was already active before the placement of the counter, it remains active. Remove all "White Ripple" counters from every monster on the field each of your standby phases. Sode no Shirayuki - Third DanceThis card can only be activated when "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami" is destroyed in battle. If the monster which destroyed "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami" in battle has ATK equal to or less than 3000, it is destroyed, all damage resulting from battle to this card's owner is negated, and all Spell/Trap cards on your opponent's field are sent to the graveyard. If the monster that destroyed "Rukia Kuchiki - Shingami" in battle has ATK greater than 3000, then you can destroy one Spell/Trap card on your opponent's field. Sode no Shirayuki - White TreeThis card can only be activated when "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami" is face-up on your field. Select one face-up monster on your opponent's field with ATK of 3000 or lower. As long as this card is in effect, that monster cannot attack or change positions, its ATK and DEF are reduced by 400, and its effect is nullified. When "Rukia Kuchiki - Shinigami" is removed from the field, this card is destroyed. Please leave some constructive criticism and general thoughts. Thanks. Next time: Orihime's cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlinFan Posted July 9, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 9, 2010 Bump. Posted the Rukia cards. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Well, Rukia's pic looks like a cosplayer. -.-" And most of your lores are so long they got confusing after a while.Ichigo- Bankai, Ichigo- Hollow, and Ichigo- New Hollow Form are op'ed for their Levels.Bankai should be at least a Level 8 if not 9Hollow should be 9New Hollow Form shoud be 11... or maybe 12...Eh, all in all, about 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NeoDemonX Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 I must said that these cards are great 8/10. Some cards are Overpowering like Ichigo Kurosaki - New Hollow Form attack but it effect is ok, and the pics are good too but some pics are burr. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CarlinFan Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 @Mata Ashita: I'll raise their levels a bit. Also, that Rukia pic isn't a cosplayer; it's just a really detailed drawing. Thanks for the feedback. @LordDemonX: New Hollow Form is meant to completely destroy the enemy for a few turns but keep your other monsters from attacking. Sorry if some of the pics are blurry. Thanks for the feedback. EDIT: Raised all "Ichigo Kurosaki" cards by one level except for "Ichigo Kurosaki - New Hollow Form", which was raised by two levels. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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