The Dark Warrior!

[The Dood]

this is my new card

 

 

 

 

its lack of power is made up in the effect

comment if its bad and needs improving btw trying to build up reps so if you like it you know what to do

thanks :D

[Brimtosis]

This card is medioka. Its effect makes it a bit op'ed. Especialy with that ATK. But, on the otherside, if it went into DEF, it would get destroyed by most Lv 5 monsters. If it had a bit less ATK, it would be good. Also, the picture is computer graphicated(?). I think you should change the pic.

 

8/10

[Cold Assassin]

6/10 that card is dangerous but would be banned in a duel so OCG is ok but your new... so..7/10

[The Dood]

thanks for the comments

[Shadowmon26]

It's really op'ed, 2300 ATK points. use a card that doubles ATK points and you can win the duel in 2 turns if you draw the right things. Lower ATK and raise DEF to like 2300, then you could get somewhere. ATK maybe like 1500. Raise Level to keep the ATK so you have to sacrifice more and maybe it'd be more fair.

[FaneCense]

It's effect is OPed, as the others have said, and I don't think you should include "once per turn", since monsters can only attack once per turn anyways. If you really want to keep it as a monster that can attack the opponent directly, adjust the ATK or DEF to an appropriate level.

[Legokun]

"Lack of power"?

No, just, broken.

It's really op'ed' date=' 2300 ATK points. use a card that doubles ATK points and you can win the duel in 2 turns if you draw the right things. Lower ATK and raise DEF to like 2300, then you could get somewhere. ATK maybe like 1500. Raise Level to keep the ATK so you have to sacrifice more and maybe it'd be more fair.

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This.

VERY broken.

If you make a card like this, lower it's ATK to at most 1600.

3/10