Nightmare Dragon

[ImmortalD]

Oh god. I can't remember when I designed this... I think it was back when I was active last. (Think that might have been about a year or two ago)

 

Anyway. I gave it all the Bells & Whistles.

 

 

[spoiler=Lore]This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card cannot be Special Summoned, except by removing from play 3 Dragon-type monsters from your graveyard. Once only, while this card is face-up on your side of the field, if this card is selected as an Attack Target, you can choose to toss a coin:

- Heads: Destroy the attacking monster after calculating Battle Damage.

- Tails: Select one monster from your side of the field (other than this card), the attacking monster must then attack that card instead of this one.

 

 

C&C Please.

[ImmortalD]

~B~~U~~~M~~~~P~~~~~!

[Dream Cabbage]

When you say once only, do you mean in the entire duel.

 

 

Other than that confusion I like it.

 

9/10

[-Berserker-]

Well, the pic is one of the most overused of the site, but I suppose you made the card when you where still new and didn't knew that...

Everything is allright except one thing:

- Heads: Destroy the attacking monster. (Normal Damage and Battle Calculations Apply.)

If the coin toss happens when the attack is declared, and resolves inmediately, then no damage is applied, and the part between parentesis should be removed. If you want the battle to continue and apply damage and all that stuff, you should change it for "destroy the attacking monster after damage calculation" or something like that.

 

The coin toss should be optional, or your opponent can smash any monster in the dragon to prevent it to use it's effect later, when it could be useful.

 

The "Once only" part can be a bit more specific. There is "Once per turn", "Only once, while this card is face-up on the field" (it can reuse the effect if it's removed from the field and returns, like with Book of Moon and Interdimensional Matter Transporter) or "Once per duel" (You can only use the effect of the card once, even if you return it to your deck and then summon it again, and cannot use the effect of multiple copies of that card during the rest of the duel, like Twin-Headed Behemoth).

 

Overall is Ok...

[Jamesgent111]

not bad not bad at akll 8.8/10 minor OCG error

[ImmortalD]

When you say once only' date=' do you mean in the entire duel.

 

 

Other than that confusion I like it.

 

9/10

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I did actually mean for a "Only once, while this card is face-up on the field" that Saikano Suggested.

 

 

Well' date=' the pic is one of the most overused of the site, but I suppose you made the card when you where still new and didn't knew that...

Everything is allright except one thing:

- Heads: Destroy the attacking monster. (Normal Damage and Battle Calculations Apply.)

If the coin toss happens when the attack is declared, and resolves inmediately, then no damage is applied, and the part between parentesis should be removed. If you want the battle to continue and apply damage and all that stuff, you should change it for "destroy the attacking monster after damage calculation" or something like that.

 

The coin toss should be optional, or your opponent can smash any monster in the dragon to prevent it to use it's effect later, when it could be useful.

 

The "Once only" part can be a bit more specific. There is "Once per turn", "Only once, while this card is face-up on the field" (it can reuse the effect if it's removed from the field and returns, like with Book of Moon and Interdimensional Matter Transporter) or "Once per duel" (You can only use the effect of the card once, even if you return it to your deck and then summon it again, and cannot use the effect of multiple copies of that card during the rest of the duel, like Twin-Headed Behemoth).

 

Overall is Ok...

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Yeah, I did mean for once while it is on the field. so when I get the chance to edit, I will (I need to re-make the card)

 

Also I was thinking about old-fashioned OCG at the time, what I meant was: The attack still goes through, but after the attack is done, and all calculations have been dealt with, the attacking monster is destroyed.

 

Meh. Coin toss optional? I suppose so. Though, if you've got a monster with 3200 ATK points, pretty much the only monsters that would select it as an Attack Target would be monsters with higher ATK anyway, and then you'd want to use the coin toss.

 

not bad not bad at akll 8.8/10 minor OCG error

 

Thanks.

[jakkk1k93]

i realli like this nice effect aswell

[ImmortalD]

Thank You Very Much!

 

EDIT: Updates complete. OCG Fixed.