justynandtony Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 now its in the right section. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Way overpowered for his levelOverused picWhy is his type Yoshi?Few OCG errors4.5/10Could be better, but eh... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justynandtony Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 thaks for the input Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Мερhilεs Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 Fake type. "Yoshi"? Could you please explain? It doesn't make sense.WAY overpowered- both for his Level and effect.3001 DEF? Just keep it 3000, the extra 1 isn't needed.A few ocg errors.Picture is squashed, and has a white border. "If this card is sent to the Graveyard as a result of battle, during your next Standby Phase Special Summon this card to your side of the field in face-up (choose one: Attack or Defence) Position. This card gains 1000 ATK each time it is Special Summoned by this effect." Yeah, a really overpowered effect, but I tried to correct is as best I could. You really need to work on this card. Sorry to say, but not very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justynandtony Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 yeah not our best one Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 10, 2010 Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 No ProblemLet's see some of the errorsGraveyard, Special Summon, and Stanby Phase is in capitalizationface-up has the dash in it, "-"Position isn't need unless it's for either Attack Position OR Defense PositionCards refer to themselves as "This card", not "he" or whateverWell, those are the errors you got, hope it helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
justynandtony Posted July 10, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2010 thanks that helps Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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