Techi☺ Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 I've deciding to Start making a series of Dragonball Z cards (a few GT) I have just started last night. Im up to about 40 of them. I think they are kinda cool. Im going to start posting them (as soon as I learn how to) and It would be nice If I got some feed back on where I went wrong Or what to change (preferably by some one who Knows what they are talking about.) [spoiler=Bardock(2 cards)] [spoiler=Spells and traps(4 cards)] [spoiler=Goku(5 cards)] [spoiler=Vegeta and Nappa(4 cards)] [spoiler=Broly] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 You must post them (when you make the thread). Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 thanks, I just put up My Bardock card. (I think). Is that the way im supposed to do it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Wardek Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 thanks' date=' I just put up My Bardock card. (I think). Is that the way im supposed to do it?[/quote'] Could you put image instead of attachment? . Because some peoples cannot download attachment. OP'd. OCG errors. Image bit blurry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 ok I'll do that!how do I get the link?I got it. Is there a such thing as ss2 goku? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 8/10. OCG Fixs: Bardock, Father of Goku: This card cannot be Normal Summoned or Set. This card can only be Special Summoned by the effect of "Father of Goku", "Saiyan Blood" or "Recuperation". Father of Goku: This card is used to Ritual Summon "Bardock, Father of Goku". You must also Tribute monsters from the field or your hand whose total Levels equal 8 or more. Goku: During your Standby Phase, you can remove this card from play to Special Summon 1 "Goku Super Saiyan" from your hand or deck._____I think this would be better for Goku: During your Standby Phase, you can pay 1000 Life Points to remove this card from play to Special Summon 1 "Goku - Super Saiyan" from your hand or deck._____Goku - Super Sayian: During your Standby Phase, you can remove this card fromplay to Special Summon 1 "Goku- Super Saiyan 3" from your hand or deck._____ I think there Goku SSJ2. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Ok, maybe 500 life points? because It isn't that big of a change. Thank you. I ll get on it right away! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chedbonlahor Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 These are decent ideas for cards as everyone loves the DBZ genre. This is what I would do to improve your cards though: In terms of the OCG there is to much for me to fix but the best way to become better with ocg is by looking at lots and lots and lots of other cards (in terms of your bardock look at black luster soldier and the way that ritual card is written). With the pictures I would use a program like image viewer and increade the definition tol make them look better. These cards are a good starter keep trying and you will improve!!! :) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 These are decent ideas for cards as everyone loves the DBZ genre. This is what I would do to improve your cards though: In terms of the OCG there is to much for me to fix but the best way to become better with ocg is by looking at lots and lots and lots of other cards (in terms of your bardock look at black luster soldier and the way that ritual card is written). With the pictures I would use a program like image viewer and increade the definition tol make them look better. These cards are a good starter keep trying and you will improve!!! :) Thank you' date=' Nice card.[hr']These are decent ideas for cards as everyone loves the DBZ genre. This is what I would do to improve your cards though: In terms of the OCG there is to much for me to fix but the best way to become better with ocg is by looking at lots and lots and lots of other cards (in terms of your bardock look at black luster soldier and the way that ritual card is written). With the pictures I would use a program like image viewer and increade the definition tol make them look better. These cards are a good starter keep trying and you will improve!!! :) Thank you, Nice card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 These are decent ideas for cards as everyone loves the DBZ genre. This is what I would do to improve your cards though: In terms of the OCG there is to much for me to fix but the best way to become better with ocg is by looking at lots and lots and lots of other cards (in terms of your bardock look at black luster soldier and the way that ritual card is written). With the pictures I would use a program like image viewer and increade the definition tol make them look better. These cards are a good starter keep trying and you will improve!!! :) I went to "Black Luster Ritual" when i was fixing 'Father of Goku'. Ok' date=' maybe 500 life points? because It isn't that big of a change. Thank you. I ll get on it right away![/quote'] 500 and 800 is still good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 almost done with the new changes to Bardock and gokuim done fixing those four, I updated them to. I Made the fusions (like Gogeta) be a Synchro summonGoku is going to be the tuner I listed the vageta cards needed on the synchro cards to. Ill post them in a minute or soI put Goku ss2-4 up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Pop culture says hi. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Hello. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 OCG Corrections.Recuperation: During your Standby Phase, place 1 Time Counter on this card (Max 8 ). You can remove 2 Time Counter to Special Summon a monster from your Graveyard. If this card Special Summoned a Saiyan monster, increase its ATK by 500.Saiyan Blood: If a Saiyan you control is destroyed as a result of a battle, Special Summon the destroyed monster to your side of the field. Increase its ATK and DEF by 700.Full Moon: Send 1 face-up Saiyan monster you control to the Graveyard. Special Summon "Great Ape" in either Attack or Defense Position from your hand, deck or Graveyard.SSJ4 Goku: Once per turn, increase the ATK of this card by 200 for each Saiyan monser you control unital the End Phase.(Vegeta, i didn't understand his effect. So i cannot correct it. Same for Nappa.) You may see these links:http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-166918.htmlI forget what the second link is. Sorry. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Hello. That's not what i meant.I mean, this belongs in pop culture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 PM a mod to move it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legokun Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 No, report this thread, ask "Could you please move this to Pop Culture? Thanks."Do NOT PM a mod about this. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Techi☺ Posted July 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 oh. okafk. for like 20 mins Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wardek Posted July 11, 2010 Report Share Posted July 11, 2010 Anyways, i remembered the second link: http://forum.yugiohcardmaker.net/thread-191818.html How to make pefect Vanilla (Normal) monsters. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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