chuku08 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 you know what the title says.tell me what you guys think about this card. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 lol, A Chaos monster, I see. Well there are a few errors, but can be easily fixedYour current errors:light and dark=LIGHT and DARKlife points, normal summoned=Life Points, Normal SummonedName needs capitalizationPic looks alright7/10 also, don't post a topic 3 times Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The God of Darkness Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Actually there is one more error it says from gravery instead of graveyard but good card though so 7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shizuku Oikawa Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 That's a spelling error isn't it?oh, yeagraveyard=Graveyardalmost forgot Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 Well, you're getting the right idea. There are a whole mess of OCG errors but I guess (since it's your first card) a good one. 8/10. Keep up the good work and remember, effect isn't everything. You got to have a good picture and good grammar. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DragonsRoar00 Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 very nice a little OCG (BTW i dont even know what OCG is) and it will be nice oh yeah i give you 7/10. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John A. Zoidberg Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 very nice a little OCG (BTW i dont even know what OCG is) and it will be nice oh yeah i give you 7/10. Don't critisize anyones OCG if you don't know what OCG is. Anyway, good picture, some OCG errors, some common grammar errors such as capitalization, punctuation, etc. It's a good start, though. 6/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
-Athena- Posted July 12, 2010 Report Share Posted July 12, 2010 very nice a little OCG (BTW i dont even know what OCG is) and it will be nice oh yeah i give you 7/10. How do you know if there's a little OCG errors if you don't know what it means? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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