Heliosora Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 These are my first two cards I know that the images are bad but I don`t have photoshop to edit them. Please rate and give some constructive criticism pleaseI have edited it showing my soultity card and the edited versions of my other cards Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 the img arent that bad ^^'im not gooood with OCG(and I dindt get the ideas of the card G-O), but i'll try to fix:Soul-Xarlue:You can send this card to the Graveyard to Special Summon a Level 5 monster with "Soultity" in its name. SoulGatheringMask:When a monster equipped with this card destroy 1 monster your opponent controls by battle, the equipped monster gains 200 ATK. Soul Gathering Mask is nice... but it would be good to see the Soultity to see if Soul Xarlue effect is good ^^ 7/10, keep goin =) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
·Toot Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 the effects r gud but i cant say the same about the pics and OCGgood effort7.5/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 13, 2010 Report Share Posted July 13, 2010 Let's see what you got here... Well first off, your first card has some slight OCG errors which I'll correct right now: When this card is sent to the Graveyard, you can Special Summon a monster with "Soultity" in it's card name. Second, the next card Soul Gathering Mask is quite effective, seeing how if you equip it to a Level 3 monster that has 500 ATK and destroys a Level 1 monster, it would be at 1000 ATK making this effective. I rate these... 9.2/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heliosora Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 I have now edited my two cards and added a new one to the first post Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kyop Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 hm, Soultity effect isnt bad ^^still there are some OCG errors8/10 ^^btw, keep goin, it looks like this can be an interessing set ^^ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grifith Posted July 14, 2010 Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Okay, Soultity isn't that bad...Let's fix the OCG: When this card is Special Summoned, you can destroy 1 Level 4 or lower monster that your opponent controls. There you have it, fixed OCG... I like the picture for Soultity, but you could get it better maybe get someone to remake it in GIMP or PhotoShop for you. My rating for Soultity: 9/10 BTW, you can also get someone to GIMP or PhotoShop the image of Soul Gathering Mask for you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Heliosora Posted July 14, 2010 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2010 Thank you very much for the constructive criticism Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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